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Golphee — Faith - Once again XD
Published: 2009-08-22 19:23:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 2796; Favourites: 92; Downloads: 36
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Sort of a sneak preview thingy of an animation I'm working on, although unfortunatly due to other commitments it may be a while before it's done
(It's not actually a screenshot though - I could never get that level of detail into an animation without killing myself 
)Anyways enjoy!
Any critique would be appreciated!
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Faith is so cute >uu👍: 0 ⏩: 0
This is geat Phoenix! Excellent colour choice that matches Faith very well, and a nice pose. :3 I also like the shading style here!
For critique, as an above member suggested you might want to avoid the Photoshop grass brush. Creating your own can be fun and make your pictures more interesting. 
Be sure to mess around with angle/colour/size/opacity jitter in the brush tab too. ;3
I could also critique the anatomy, but it might be easier for me to redline the pic - May I?
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Thanks for the advice Kelidah ^^ And by all means - I can never get anatomy right so I'd be really gratefull if you did redline it ^^
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I hope it's self explanatory cause I gotta go. xD; Any questions, feel free to ask and I'll reply asap. Sorry my redlines are normally more informative but I have no time xD)
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Yay! Thanks Kelidah, I really appreciate it ^^ and I can see how you mean with the anatomy and stuff
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Glad you were able to understand!
I prefer to just give people one or two main things to work on, so now that I have time I'll say that I think you shoud maybe define the shape of the legs a bit more, like I demonstrated in the redline, and also for the neck - lots of people draw them kinda like a snake or a swan neck. A common mistake. It shouldn't really...bump up like that....gah hard to explain. Hope you see what I mean in the redline. xD
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Ahh yes I know what you mean with the bump XD And the legs too - I'll keep that in mind next time ^^
Thanks again!
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I know you probably get this like a million times a day; but that is amazing! Could I make a very small request? Next time you draw something in the grass, would you mind drawing the grass by hand? I just love it when people don't use the grass brush. I do when I'm in a hurry, but you know what I mean. Lovely BG too
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lol sure thing ^^ It annoys me when people use the grass brush too, but I'd just finished the image and I was so fed up with it that I couldn't be bothered to make a proper grass affect XD
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Very nice. I like the subtle line art and the shading is beautiful. I can't wait to see your animation.
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Great job! <3 Love the face abd shading! ^^ also like the non-lineart on this 8D
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lol thanks Alex ^^ There is lineart in this one - but it's very subtle XD Some people said they prefered picures with lineart and some said without, so I just did both
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YAY ANOTHER ANIMATION i hate how the take a long time to do!
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wow beautiful work 83 i can't wait to see the finished animation *O* i bet it will be amazing.
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Nice job!
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I didn't know you had a Deviant account! I love your stuff on YouTube!
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