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jagajay [2016-09-13 23:26:28 +0000 UTC]
^^
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Shenronn [2016-04-10 21:48:22 +0000 UTC]
Sas-gay 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
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Hetalia-Filipinas [2015-08-17 02:39:41 +0000 UTC]
I'm trying not to let my inner-fangirl out...
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naruko6783 [2015-05-10 02:27:17 +0000 UTC]
its cool
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SGR214 [2013-10-20 22:00:37 +0000 UTC]
Could use a huge revision. I like the idea but it need more background story, her existence in the story, is it a cannon world or are there changes between your story and cannon? The idea she coming from sand country but HOW she got there?
Also grammar is a bit bad. I'm not perfect either but this has too many of it.
It's ok but recommend revising.
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