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gimpy812 — I Miss You

Published: 2004-02-21 15:48:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 439; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 66
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Description I writhe in the cold
As the icy blasts burn my face
I'm so afraid my tears will freeze
As I wonder "is your heart this cold?"

Everyday I think about
The sweet nothings that were whispered
"You like strawberry, I like you"
Will echo in my thoughts for eternity

Am I so easily forsaken
By those delicate phrases
"You're an angel" and
"I love you" so easliy slip away

You were so much like
The unforgiving sand in the hour glass
The tighter I held onto you
The faster you slipped away
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Comments: 7

saga-gemini [2004-03-09 15:15:38 +0000 UTC]

it's good!!

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chicsdigmohawks [2004-02-27 16:00:52 +0000 UTC]

love it babe

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closedmind [2004-02-22 23:11:27 +0000 UTC]

this is nice. i love the first stanza. especially these :
As the icy blasts burn my face
I'm so afraid my tears will freeze

love the new avatar as well

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gimpy812 In reply to closedmind [2004-02-23 03:27:51 +0000 UTC]

thanks honey, you always leave me the BEST comments. hehe

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silent-screamer [2004-02-22 00:02:11 +0000 UTC]

the last stanza is really well done
good job

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Solitude-within [2004-02-21 22:02:57 +0000 UTC]

Wow, i havn't read any of your other stuff (yet) but i wouldnt class that as average, i really like it . well done.

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gimpy812 In reply to Solitude-within [2004-02-22 06:25:26 +0000 UTC]

*curtsy* Thank you love, you made me smile.

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