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gimpy812 — Bleeding Heart
Published: 2003-10-20 00:20:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 286; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 14
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Description Bestill my bleeding heart
Please help me pick up the broken pieces
Of you and me

I wish you'd pry the blade out of my hand
Now there's no turning back
Vision growing black
Wishing I had just one more glimpse of you

Blood stains on the tile
Hardly a second glance at the empty vessel
Flashing lights come fast
You stare through the glass
Of the spotless room I occupy

Scars I have to hide
Nothing left inside
Glassy eyes stare longingly
For you
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Comments: 6

closedmind [2003-11-17 03:38:14 +0000 UTC]

wow just wow

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gimpy812 In reply to closedmind [2003-11-29 06:27:32 +0000 UTC]

thank you... i reread this tonight and I just kida said whoa cause i didn't realize i ould write like this, even though i see al the mistakes in it.... thnk you for the comment

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candlewik [2003-10-23 21:56:05 +0000 UTC]

this is nice!

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gimpy812 In reply to candlewik [2003-10-24 18:19:25 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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chicsdigmohawks [2003-10-20 22:01:16 +0000 UTC]

this is great

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silent-screamer [2003-10-20 00:55:10 +0000 UTC]

this is so beautiful ... so romantic too

"I wish you'd pry the blade out of my hand" <- I love this line
nice work!

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