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Gerundive — Happy One Year Anniversary
Published: 2016-11-01 08:21:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 270; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 0
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This is mine and Dawks one year anniversary, this may be my best peice of art I want to say its flawless but I'm sure someone is going to say something about it. My heart was put into like no other and it means a ton to him and I. This took about four hours to finish maybe longer. It was done on Fire Alpaca and all was finished on it. I'm tired now but again this means a lot.Related content
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I really like that you added more details to the background and fur of Dawks representation. Falling leaves, lines on grass and foam on river are nice addition too. I think that proportions between distant and close objects are better than usually. Nice touch with differentiation of colours of leaves on trees.
As you made the water a bit blurred (which is good, it makes river more dynamic), I think you should add a little (but not overdone!) blurr to all moving objects (some leaves have it already) - it would make the picture more dynamic. Paws of Dawks representation have a bit twisted look. Paws of your representation are bit too massive in comparison to real life wolves, also her "forearms" are too long in comparison to her "arms". You should avoid longer straight lines, they're rare in nature. Also, trees seem too similar to each other, too round and they make almost straight line. It makes the background look like a park, not a forest where wild wolves live.
Over all, I have to say, that this work shows a BIG improvement in your skills.
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uhmm.....I feel the trees and the plants smell...x3
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To quote the description:
"I want to say its flawless but I'm sure someone is going to say something about it."
And you were right, someone was going to say something about it.
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Read the words instead of the sentence. There is nothing wrong with it in my opinion.
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Thank you this means so much to me
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Thank you so much in so happy
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