artificus [2015-03-02 13:19:25 +0000 UTC]
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This looks wonderful, I love the detailof her face and the shading.but you are right - it turned out a little too dark. Maybe you could save it by a more precise light source - I guess the light comes from the left mainly, but it's not very strong. Maybe stronger shadows/more contrast would help, because then you could at least put slight shadows in her white dress and her white hair too, so they both get more depth/structure.However, because this is a pencil drawing there is limited room for experiments e.deviantart.net/emoticons/x/x… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="93" title="XD"/> Perhaps you could try wether or not my suggestion works digitally, before you actually change the drawing e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="19" height="19" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="417" title="Sweating a little..."/>
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moonlitinuyasha1985 In reply to artificus [2015-03-02 20:38:26 +0000 UTC]
Impressive!
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Alexgv-art [2015-03-03 12:51:01 +0000 UTC]
nice job, the expression on her face is great
groovygillian [2015-03-02 13:09:39 +0000 UTC]
I love this :3 good job