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Published: 2013-01-24 21:16:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 3651; Favourites: 151; Downloads: 85
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Not really happy with the result but here it is anyway.EDIT: Thanks guys! Oh and forgot to mention that this is an environment exploration for a 2d game project that I'm doing at my school. Added some routs or something to give it more motion.
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I like it but with your quality of work I understand what you mean. something tiny is missing but still excellent work
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Did a update for this one. I think the main problem was that it didn't have a foreground. At least I'm "happier" with this one now
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really good.It changes a lot.)
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I understant you when you say you're not happy with it, even if it's really a nice picture, but it lacks something that the other ones have.
I don't really know what, I find here there is a lack of focus. Or maybe just a lack of brighter colours, of brilliant light.
It's still nice, but i prefer your other paintings ^^.
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This is a fairly quick painting though it did lack something. I painted in a foreground element giving it more depth and motion, take a look!
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That's nicer now ^^.
But i still prefer your brighter (or more contrasted maybe) paintings
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Looks great actually. Murky and dark, like I'd imagine it to be...
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Why are you not really happy? If youยดd ask me, I could find one or two critical points (I really like it, though), but it would be interesting to hear what a professional thinks about his own work.
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I think it mainly lacked a foreground which made it look a bit flat I think soo I fixed it, take a look. At least it doesn't bug me as much anymore. Thanks.
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The colors are sensational, they have such depth and age
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Glad you like it. Made a update on this one, take a look.
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Oh god just... Man. Seriously. How do you do that? Nah, dont even tell me, just keep your magic and Ima just wate, enjoy and slowclap. Oh, I showed some of ur work at my school (of viual arts) and everyone loved it. Keep 'em coming!
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Hehe, thanks! Wow, you did? That's cool! I'm glad to hear that, thanks. I will, when time allows. Busy with school projects.
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i really don't see what you don't like here, but well, the creator always sees it differently...
for me, brilliant work! nice dark and moody, really good atmosphere!
fav!
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Thanks man, well I have a problem with being too self-critical. I think it lacked some sort of foreground element so I put one in, take a look!
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yeah, i know what you mean... rather tell everyone what went wrong beforehand, just in case. only problem, most people won't even see it till you pointed it out ^^
still an awesome pic... but i think the one tentacle/root going around the ships house is a bit too agile, looks like its moving... at least fora a root...
but hey, don't ponder about it too much! let it be and just move on to the next! for me, it is one way or the other a great painting!
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The thing was that I didn't know what bugged me about this painting at first, otherwise I would have told them. I know what you mean with the root thing and I agree. But as you said, time to move on. Cheers.
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