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Published: 2008-07-08 12:26:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 183; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 1
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Description Why won't you let me...

It hurts.
It hurts.
It hurts.

I can't breathe. Your face.
I can't breathe. Your hands.
I can't breathe. Your eyes.

Please, let me have you.
I love you so much.
Why won't you let me... touch you?

My heart. It's in pain.
I can't breathe. I love you.
Please, don't go away.
I CAN'T breathe!!!. Help?

I wan't you near me. Always.
Please, don't deny me. Help.
I love you.
Kill me.
I can't live without you.
I LOVE YOU!. I CAN'T BREATHE!!!!!!

Please, someone..
It kills me.
Love kills me.
Who's she?

Why won't you let me touch you?
Why's SHE there?
It hurts. I can't breathe..
I want you.
Touch you.
Feel you.
Please
Help
Kill

I can't breathe...
Won't you, save me?
It kills me....

This...

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Comments: 16

lataeralia [2009-01-22 20:48:08 +0000 UTC]

omg this is perfect for the moment I'm living right now!!

anyway, this is very powerful, really

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Fyviel In reply to lataeralia [2009-01-24 17:45:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for all the favs^^
And thanks for your support

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lataeralia In reply to Fyviel [2009-01-25 03:12:24 +0000 UTC]

my pleasure

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meriirem [2008-07-08 13:55:46 +0000 UTC]

Omfg. That is great.
I can feel the pain.
I can live it.

Wow

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Fyviel In reply to meriirem [2008-07-08 15:00:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!!!
^^

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WillemoRosehill [2008-07-08 12:38:56 +0000 UTC]

MARTINA GOOOOOOD wonderful!

Im gonna start faving again
And.. i love the way you put it... it..goes under our skin somehow... hrm..I can't explain it Oo

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Fyviel In reply to WillemoRosehill [2008-07-08 12:50:44 +0000 UTC]

It's okey.. I get you.

But like I said.. Imagine a person read it up, in just on breath.
It will sound, so painful

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WillemoRosehill In reply to Fyviel [2008-07-08 12:59:13 +0000 UTC]

I know.. I tried XD
Hurts like hll, I can say.

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Fyviel In reply to WillemoRosehill [2008-07-08 13:18:23 +0000 UTC]

HAHAHAH"!
OMG YOU TRIED IT?`.... your'e so strange..

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WillemoRosehill In reply to Fyviel [2008-07-09 16:04:11 +0000 UTC]

SORRY
And yes I did? hhaha I mostly read good poems out loud ^^
And you love me cause im strange <3

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Fyviel In reply to WillemoRosehill [2008-07-09 16:10:31 +0000 UTC]

You very much ont to: that I love you...

What if I don't love you, reading poems with only one breath??
Maybe I think you totally stupid, and hate you...for it?

Oo
Who knows...

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WillemoRosehill In reply to Fyviel [2008-07-09 16:12:04 +0000 UTC]

Then i would be a total fool...

That everybody thinks is strange

And its not THAT stupid!

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Fyviel In reply to WillemoRosehill [2008-07-09 16:13:59 +0000 UTC]

Not stupid, since I did it myself. just to get the feeling.

But though, it already was my feelings, so I guess I didn't have to do that.

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WillemoRosehill In reply to Fyviel [2008-07-09 17:17:49 +0000 UTC]

maaah..i guess you right.

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UruseiRox [2008-07-08 12:28:54 +0000 UTC]

wow, this is...
deep

wow,i wish i could write like that

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Fyviel In reply to UruseiRox [2008-07-08 12:34:22 +0000 UTC]

Oh thank you!

You just write down what you feel at the moment.
I can't write for real

This just came up..
Thank youu for commenting<3

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