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Sky-Circus [2010-05-21 03:48:58 +0000 UTC]
I like how the gore isn't particularly...I want to say poetic, but that can't be right. Not glorified? Fascination versus some sort of metaphor for how dark your nail polish is (Mine's as dark as my soul).
Mmmm, but the chatty matter of fact attitude makes it so much more horrifying. I like it.
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fwick In reply to Sky-Circus [2010-05-23 01:03:10 +0000 UTC]
why thank you, that's exactly what I thought when I first re-read this. it's so casual it makes me afraid of myself kinda... like sara, seriously, stay away from that machete.
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HanaArtwork [2010-05-11 03:05:41 +0000 UTC]
it makes me think of that weird instinct that pops into my head whenever I feel a ping of hurt.
just chop it off, get rid of it.
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fwick In reply to HanaArtwork [2010-05-11 23:35:36 +0000 UTC]
you get that too??
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HanaArtwork In reply to fwick [2010-05-12 00:33:59 +0000 UTC]
mhmmmmm!
"ouch I got a papercut!"
brain: Oh don't worry, just cut it off, it'll be fine.
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fwick In reply to HanaArtwork [2010-05-12 22:50:25 +0000 UTC]
like, splinter? I can just carve out all the skin around it. sweet.
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