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Description Character of (Un)Equilibrium improvisation comic

So yeah, taking part on improvisation comic and I'm quite exicetd about it, because I have always wanted to do impro comic based on human characters : 3
So here's my character Mio, better known as her username Shimi.
Got a chance to practise again some digital drawing, and I'm so happy about the colouring of Shimi~ Took 4 days to finish this, sheesh o3o

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UnE - (Un)Equilibrium improvisation comic
Character by Fuugis


|| Name: Mio || Game username: Shimi ||
Age: 17
Height: 159cm
Game type: MMORPG player


|| Shimi (Level 36) ||

>Strenght -type character
>Nature/earth element
>Attacks with magic and weapon combinations

*The game Shimi belongs to:
Shimi is a character of a fantasy themed online rpg, which is based on dungeon exploring and treasure hunting.

Shimi/Mio plays this game with her friends, so she's used on teamwork playing. Before getting stuck inside the game, she played her own game with the team of 4 players. 

*Personality:
Teamwork player, so usually gets nicely along with everyone. Cheerful, but not loud or super chatty, but really curious about everything. Loves too much stupid jokes about vegetables. Yeah, she has an interesting taste of humor.
For Mio games are a good way to spend freetime, and more fun to play with friends. Here's one reason why she doesn't understand people who are taking gaming too seriously. Why they can't just have fun and being not bothered about game overs and stuff like that?

*Weapons:
> Shimi's main weapon's using way is similar with a warhammer or mace. The main weapon she uses is really heavy, which is why a strenght type character like Shimi can use it easily. The main weapon can be used with both hands or with one hand. Shimi keeps this weapon usually unequipped, and uses it only in battle situations.

>Shimi's other weapons are small bomb flowers, sized about 9cm. These bombs has different coloured flowers on them. Each colour has different purpose, examble yellow flower for paralyzing smoke, red flower for making an explosion and so on.

>Shimi carries also with her some potions and other items which she has found from her own game.


|| Mio ||

>2nd year high school student

*Personality
In real life Shimi aka Mio is a bit shy, but sweet girl. She's a highschool student, doing fine with her studies and trying to deside what to do after high school, like most of the other students too. 

Shimi lives together with her mom, her older brother, and with their dog Dino, who loves to interrupt Mio when she's playing if Mio hasn't remembered to check that the door of her room is closed properly. Her granny lives also close their house, so Mio is able to visit there on her freetime.

Mio was part of Scouts still some years ago, but high school started to take too much of her free time so she had to quit it.
 
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Comments: 7

Smilygurl143 [2015-02-25 19:38:33 +0000 UTC]

Nice job here!
You've pretty much mastered your coloring, that much is quite evident from just looking at this, but I think you need to work on a few things still.
Just some stuff I noticed:
Shimi:
Her proportions are just slightly off, and here smile looks a little scary. Another thing: If you are going to make and MMO character, I would suggest not having them look at the onlooker as if they have life. Give them a blank look, and emphasize their surreal presence. 
Try to make the metal on her seem more hard and reflective than soft and cloth-like.
Her posture is just a tad off and she seems to be leaning back in an odd, uncomfortable position.
You did a very good job with her design, and she looks unique and awesome.

Mio:
Okay, I feel like you didn't spend enough time just drawing her to make her an OC
She doesn't really have any distinctive features. You want her to look unique, special to you.
Her shoulder-to-chest and waist-to-foot proportions are also a little off.
Also work on her jawline, which looks offset and slanted, like two halves of different faces put together.
Other than that, she's really cute. You kind of make her look like the kind of girl who wouldn't play MMORPG, leaving a lot of space for story. This is a nice feature.
Overall, I really liked this piece.
Nice work!

If you think that anything that I have written in this comment is abusive, please feel free to delete it and report me. I would like it if you told me why you deleted it so that I can improve my future comments
Thanks!!

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Fuugis In reply to Smilygurl143 [2015-02-25 20:09:39 +0000 UTC]

Oh, thank you for the comment, it was interesting to read because I haven't had such a long comment before :3

I'm glad to hear that you liked Shimi's design. In her outfit the "strong" parts are not metal, I have imagined them to look and more like strong plastic material which reflect light very little. Hmm, how to explain, well, kind of the material they would use in a space suits I guess? Sorry, my english is horrible, but I hope you understand even little what I'm trying to explain here XD

This MMO character is made more human like in purpose, because character is for improvisation comic, and it's hard to draw a character without any good face expressions, and blank faces are quite boring to watch. And the comic is based on future where people play games with oculus rifts where the part of players mind is allowed to get inside the virtual game, so I guess that allows the character to be more alive?


And about Mio: I desided to keep this character very simple because there's already lot of details in Shimi's design. And in the impro comic we will draw more Shimi than Mio, so Mio more like a side character.
After drawing Shimi's picture and spending so much time for colouring and etc. I thought that I will only make rough sketch about Mio's design that the other comic drawers know how she will look like.

But happy to hear that you overall liked the designs and thank you for writing so long comment! This feedback came really handy, thank you! n___n

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Smilygurl143 In reply to Fuugis [2015-02-25 20:40:21 +0000 UTC]

I really enjoy posting long comments 'cause I feel like they're more useful than short ones (duh!)

You're english is just fine, and I think you struck all the right points that you were looking for in her outfit. I would advise using a more textured brush for the space-suit outfits, though.

I was actually under the impression the Mio is Shimi, and that she's just her character online...? Also, have you read Sword Art Online? I think you'd like it.

I'm happy that you enjoyed reading it and got back to me so fast. It's so fun to read replies!

PS. I don't know if you remember a group called digital newbies, but I like to try commenting on every deviation that goes into that group, so I hope to see your work again!!
Thanks for the reply!!

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Fuugis In reply to Smilygurl143 [2015-02-26 00:02:21 +0000 UTC]

Yeah definitely, it's great to have long comments even once XD

Oh yeah, Mio is Shimi, but the happenings in the impro comic are mostly inside the game world where Mio's alter ego Shimi belongs, so we are going to draw Shimi more :3

And yes, SAO is a great anime! Loved season 1 and the second season was great too >w<

But hey, that's great! It's awesome that there's someone who wants to give proper feedback for the drawers n___n
Thank you!

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Smilygurl143 In reply to Fuugis [2015-02-26 03:32:39 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!!

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McRomu [2015-02-01 09:42:16 +0000 UTC]

Their designs  are very cute! I especially like Shimi's color scheme :3

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Fuugis In reply to McRomu [2015-02-01 11:12:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, glad to hear that >w<

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