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Furihime โ HMLS - Expose Your Magus
Published: 2013-09-08 13:00:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 10726; Favourites: 845; Downloads: 57
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Special assignment for
Area 3 theme: "The first time your Magus discover their ability"
The first time Fras discover his telekinetic ability was when he was helping his family prepared for the opening of their cake shop. The kitchen utensils were flying towards him. He was surprised and confused that time.
Sorry for the BG, I don't have any idea how to make a kitchen Fras, why you must discover your ability in a place like that
Area 3 Duce - Fraser Archibalt (c) me
My area member submission
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Comments: 98
The drawing it well done, love the eyes and colors. Eye are suppose to be defined(it shows a lot about the drawing and person)but also if to defined it will not look good or seems overpowering. Personally for me, i'm not to fond of really bright colors. They look great in certain things, in this case they look good, but maybe lightening them up just a tad will make it look a little better.(Honestly, i'm not to good with that, sorry. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/f/fโฆ " width="15" height="15" alt="
Hope to see more of your work, you have talent, just need practice to make it flourish. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sโฆ " width="15" height="15" alt="
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ok, it's my first time writing a real critique *A*
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I'll start with the positive things:
The composition of the colors is magnificient. They all suit each other and create a nice harmony. The arrangement of movement is also perfect. With this it looks alive and quite real. The expression of the character just supports this. The used pattern in the background and in nearly every color expand the color range. I especially like the choice of the point of view /the angle. It allows to see more of background and character. For shading I've got only one word: excellent! You've got an incredible sense of where the shadows have to be and where light!
Now the negative things:
Something about those flying things disturbs me. They seem to be like an eye-catcher. It's hard to concentrate on the main character with this many details. They are well done but still: less is more.
The light effects in his eyes are a bit overdone. It looks a bit off. Eyes aren't normally the brightest spot on the body. (That's why I only gave 4.5 in both Vision and Impact.)
All in all: I can see your effort and hope you keep this great work up!
-Zue
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I expose my Magus sometimes. But then I get kicked out of the bar.
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i love your work!!!! keep submiting good art!!!
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its a VERY lovely picture but i dont know what to focus on
the colors are pretty and u drew the boy very well but i feel like theres too much going on
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Thank you dear \(โงโโฆ)/
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Thank you โขโฎ(โ.โ)โญโข
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i stalked through that HMLS-group... thehehe.. it is awesome!
i read that you have to be invited..is there a way for me to get in? what do i have to do to join?
and a question: what's that about the duces? may you explain it to me, please?~
thanks a lot!
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I'm really sorry, the group is full now... ( หโฟห) I don't know when it will be opened again....
The duces is, kind of like a leader for each area... OwOd
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aww.. still thanks for informing me^^
would you mind inviting me when it is open again?
ahh ok i get it
thanks~
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I don't know when though, it's gonna be a long time since the group has just started I think..
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bootiful
shh the bg is still pretty and close enough to become something as kitchen //slapped
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Thank you dear!
If I don't describe it then no one would know
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Not a problem<3!
rofl, and it would be like castle at the first glance 8D
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It look like magical castle ;A; to me
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cepet banget sih mbak keren banget sih mbak imba banget sih mbakkk ~~
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Hey, where's the other member of shota unit?
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