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Published: 2012-07-27 16:20:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 578; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 5
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lol i hopez u like it........i spent like 30 min on it.....if u think you can color it u can......but give me credit and send me a link to the finished pic...Related content
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Ok , so :
Pros :
-Eyes look good
-Outlining looks ok and makes the piece pop out
-Hair looks fine
-Detail is ok
Cons :
-you can still see some
- Pointy nose, needs to be a little less pointy
-Bottom of the pony Needs to be a little skinny
-Chin needs to be a little outward, not inside
Besides the cons, the drawings looks pretty good to me! ^^ Try to keep note that, work slowly, that helps most artists!
Remember practice makes perfect! The thing you need to work on are the perspectives ! ^^ Long live drawing! And hope this lets makes you improve!
-- Animeshooter
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thank you so much. im working on my skills if you've noticed ive gotten a bit better.
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Mhm, especially with poses ^^
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Realizing that you are my sister and are a fairly young artist, I realize that this is a large acheivement for you. Overall, this is a very well done drawing. However, there are a few discrepancies that I find when looking at it more closly. the nose starts a little high and makes the face seem slightly awkward and out of proportion. The collar of his shirt (the part of it that is closest) should be shaded ever so slightly. Just under the nose should be as well. The arms are slightly smaller in proportion than what they should be. The hair should be a little smoother in the back. Also the pose you established is different than the reference picture you used and the collar should be adjusted in the back to crease it inward. Some of the things I must applaud you on are the eyes. They express the mood of the character very well. the hair itself is well done although I would suggest you take a sketchier approach and leave the hair that way. The chin is very nice but could come out a little further. Like I stated previously, very nice. Just a few details need to be worked out.
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I don't really see what you could do better. It's as good as it can get in my opinion. I think you've done a really good jod with this. I like how you added your own twist from the original drawing. Rada Rada Rada Rada R A D A R A D A R A D A R A D A RADA RADA RADA RADA R A D A Words word words that mean words even more words that mean even more words and then the dinasoaur say rawr it means I love you so ya my dino loves you
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