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Description Hello! ^w^.

THE IMPORTANT THING IS BETWEN THE LINES
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well this is.. emm is Rachel my OC ^_^, she is the protagonist of a tale I was thinking like 6 years ago . yay, she was in my mind for all that time, I have drawn her before, but this is the first time on DA , actually that`s not her outfit, I dont know why I made it that way. but her main feautures are, the red/orange hair (yes! I love that color), ponytail, sometimes torn, sometimes simple.

tools:
-Mechanical pencil 0.7.
-stylograph 0.3.
-scanner
-wacom bamboo <3<3<3<3<3.
-photoshop CS4
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**BAD ENGLISH WARNING**

Story details (to long and boring lol):

Story of "Trae": Trae is a fictional world that was very advanced in technology, there is also magic sources in Trae, Sources used by some people called Adepts, for centuries, Adepts was cataloged as demons, capable of casting elemental magic, they were followed until their extintion (or that everybody thought), that was the only obstacle to reach the true utopia and finish all harmful sources, then "Trae" became a vast utopia.

To prevent the wars and the crime their habitants gave all the military power to a single being, a very intelligent being, she was "Galata", an incredible IA center, she has the power to decide every use of any electrical tool/weapon in the world, so nobody was able to handle a electrical harming tool/weapon, one day the higest scientist group from "Trae" decided to give a material body to "Galata", they transfered all the information of her brain into a half mechanical, half organic body, But "Galata" whos only goal was finishing all harmful sources, knew that.. if there was organic beings on Trae, there would be always "adepts", was by that ideal conflict inside the mind of "Galata", the start of a massive rebellion, "Galata" used all the power of electrical things in all the world to destroy the "human-kind", people couldn´t use weapons, vehicles or anything related to electrical things, "Galata" was able to make legions of robots and vehicles with the only prupose to destroy every organical being in "trae", the human kind was reduced to 40% of the original population, without weapons or any kind of defense, their only way to fight "Galata" was use magic.

then, the Adepts who shelter for years in small towns and retired locations, came out to fight, using phisical weapons without electrical energy to improve thier skills, the fight take years and years, but a small group of Adepts reached "Galata´s lair", "galata" who as half organical being herself, was able to be an Adept chosen by "Trae" as well, her IA just reached a conclution: "the end justifies the means", so "Galata" used her weapons and magic to defend herself, at this point, the material body of Galata was near indestructible, so this group of adepts locked her in her domains and using all of their power petrified and put "Galata" in orbit together with her big lair. the 6 Adepts get petrified too, and nowdays 6 pillars points to the Huge orbitating "galata´s lair".
All weapon and electrical tools, was buried during the time.

in the present the remaining humans started to develope a new tecnology using as fuel the magic of "tare" and the "adepts", any use or electrical Energy was punished, every human feared that a minimal spark of artifial electrical energy would wake up "Galata", without "Galata" an her power to protect people of theirselves the humans were free again to kill one to each other, and Divived the world in four big advanced nations: "Tron", "Tuso", "Tsae" and "Tsew", 120 years later, the four nations decided to make a truce, but "Tron", the most advanced Nation, decided to take the truce as a chance of getting the most lethal weapon..."Galata".

Rachel´s story:
She is an "adept" that lives in a village of humanoid cats, these cats helped her to escape from an assault of her hometown, the assault was made by soldiers from "Tron" one of the four big nations that rules the world of "Trae", these soldiers were looking for abandoned Robots dawn in the fight against "Galata", to revive her.
in this asault, the father of Rachel was killed and her mother was rapted, until today she resides in this cat town and spends almost all the time in a near temple made by adepts thousand of years ago.
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Comments: 42

FandomFoodie [2018-02-21 02:03:32 +0000 UTC]

Has she had any crossovers since then?

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awildchelseaappeared [2010-11-23 21:11:06 +0000 UTC]

her hand is so dainty!
i need to commission you, hon. i'd love to see what you could do to my Pelleia!
i needs more points tho

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franja2190 In reply to awildchelseaappeared [2010-11-24 01:28:54 +0000 UTC]

awww I can take a free request for you hon , the only problem is that It will take some time ;w;, but tell me tell me ^_^.

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awildchelseaappeared In reply to franja2190 [2010-11-24 01:30:21 +0000 UTC]

that's so sweet of you!!
well, i suppose the best thing i could as of you is to do my most treasured OC, Pelleia! i bet you'd capture her perfectly!

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franja2190 In reply to awildchelseaappeared [2010-11-24 02:04:05 +0000 UTC]

sure hon , I will ask you a favor please =3, could you "note" me with some references? , this way I can have all the request in my inbox so I cant forget about any .

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awildchelseaappeared In reply to franja2190 [2010-11-24 02:05:51 +0000 UTC]

sure! and if there's anything you'd like me to try drawing, i'd be happy to do it!
(i say try because i can't promise it'll be perfect, but i'll try my best!)

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franja2190 In reply to awildchelseaappeared [2010-12-06 17:31:09 +0000 UTC]

k hon ;D

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PhantomParticle [2010-06-16 02:14:45 +0000 UTC]

deep and Hope this book is in production

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Eamanestripes [2010-06-14 15:35:38 +0000 UTC]

beautiful story and....such beautiful colouring and the eyes~! You have me at the heterochromic eyes...

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franja2190 In reply to Eamanestripes [2010-06-16 02:11:22 +0000 UTC]

awww thanks I am gladd you liked it! (and if you laughted with my english, I am so glaad too !). yay gotta love heterochromia

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Eamanestripes In reply to franja2190 [2010-06-16 02:50:06 +0000 UTC]

I love it~! yes I haveta love heterochromia...purrrrrr~!

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Xpuk [2010-06-14 05:16:28 +0000 UTC]

looks good but I think taht her left eye is a little to low XD

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franja2190 In reply to Xpuk [2010-06-16 02:08:15 +0000 UTC]

D:! i look her closer and its true !. ***Perspective fail*** Dx!

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Xpuk In reply to franja2190 [2010-06-16 05:11:10 +0000 UTC]

Dont worry happends to the best

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fatmandreams [2010-06-14 05:10:16 +0000 UTC]

awesome job

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franja2190 In reply to fatmandreams [2010-06-16 02:07:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks bud

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Cem-2 [2010-06-14 04:19:13 +0000 UTC]

No pense que rachel tuviera el pelo de color rojo O_O

Ya se me hacia raro q no hubiera ninguno de ella por aca, siempre me gusto ^^

el coloreado genial, me teine q enseñar .

Esta muy muy muy genialoso !! ^^

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franja2190 In reply to Cem-2 [2010-06-16 02:07:12 +0000 UTC]

haha si siempre fue peliroja , no ahora que lo pienso desde que sali del colegio nunca la volvi a dibujar hasta ahora, es mas, en el colegio ya le tenia una ropa fija, y cuando la fui a dibujar de nuevo.. cree que me acorde? hahah por eso le puse esa temporal . todo bn ^_^!

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PhantomParticle [2010-06-13 20:21:39 +0000 UTC]

nice nice back story

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franja2190 In reply to PhantomParticle [2010-06-16 02:05:44 +0000 UTC]

have you read it all? omg thank you (ºwº)!!!. gladd you liked ^_^!!

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AnimeRejecht [2010-06-13 19:26:21 +0000 UTC]

I wish I had heterochromia!!!
Well done, as usual. Keep it up.

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franja2190 In reply to AnimeRejecht [2010-06-13 19:33:45 +0000 UTC]

YES SIR!!, Maybe should be odd, but I dream having a daugther with red hair and heterochromia ....
quite impossible .

ok.. I am weird, I admit

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swen23 [2010-06-13 13:07:08 +0000 UTC]

oooh, I love the combination of red hair and one green and one blue eye!!! this is like one character from one stupid space-simulaton game (mmm... Renegade: battle for Jacob's star I think...) and there was a short hair girl this type... aaah... I loved her :-P

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franja2190 In reply to swen23 [2010-06-13 19:29:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ñ_ñ, years ago, I tought that having a character with different Eye colors, was pretty original... the time pased fast and I noticed that a feature like that, is too common , anyway actually the right green eye has a reason to be ^_^.

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swen23 In reply to franja2190 [2010-06-13 20:32:03 +0000 UTC]

I like it, simply I like it But If I have two dofferent eye colors I will look not so sexy as those drawing, but little bit weird like David Bowie :-D :-D :-D (despite that I like his music..:-D )

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franja2190 In reply to swen23 [2010-06-16 02:21:10 +0000 UTC]

lol!, well I had a teacher with Heterochromia (one eye brown, another dark green), and well acrually I prefer it on girls !

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swen23 In reply to franja2190 [2010-06-16 16:43:32 +0000 UTC]

mmm, it must be great!!! I wanna se it on real people... The most beautiful eyes I have seen ever was (both of the smae color :-D) of one small sweet russian teen - they had color as hunny :-P mmmm... very sweet

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franja2190 In reply to swen23 [2010-06-18 16:00:02 +0000 UTC]

ohh Russians ....

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swen23 In reply to franja2190 [2010-06-18 17:36:37 +0000 UTC]

mmm... yes, small young sweet russian girl :-P O

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franja2190 In reply to swen23 [2010-06-24 02:17:58 +0000 UTC]

ohhh... sweett....hahaha I´m a perv xD

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swen23 In reply to franja2190 [2010-06-25 09:45:25 +0000 UTC]

O mmm, by the seein' one like her.. who won't be? :-P :-D :-D

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FuzzyBridges89 [2010-06-13 10:20:50 +0000 UTC]

really good looking character, love the eyes.

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franja2190 In reply to FuzzyBridges89 [2010-06-13 19:26:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^_^, Hurray for the lesbians !.

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FuzzyBridges89 In reply to franja2190 [2010-06-14 00:29:46 +0000 UTC]

hell yeah.

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caoilainn [2010-06-13 05:31:56 +0000 UTC]

She looks so sweet! ^^

You and I both seem to love red-headed girls, lol.

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franja2190 In reply to caoilainn [2010-06-13 05:44:39 +0000 UTC]

awwww Red-headed girls
Thnks kee much appreciated .

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Kaiten002 [2010-06-13 05:25:14 +0000 UTC]

I like the design, it is very flashy and appealing. Keep it up, and check your resolution canvas to avoid aliasing.

to lazy to read all that wall of text, sorry.

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franja2190 In reply to Kaiten002 [2010-06-13 05:42:20 +0000 UTC]

no problem I know is a lot of text ^_^. thanks for the tip .

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Kirra2 [2010-06-13 05:22:32 +0000 UTC]

very nice

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franja2190 In reply to Kirra2 [2010-06-13 05:41:18 +0000 UTC]

thanks but, do you saw the warrior or Rachel? ^_^, I mean when I submited the Deviation, I put accidentaly the red warrior instead of Rachel D:.

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Kirra2 In reply to franja2190 [2010-06-14 01:52:11 +0000 UTC]

haha oh ok I see rachael, she looks amazing.

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franja2190 In reply to Kirra2 [2010-06-16 02:16:11 +0000 UTC]

aw ok sorry, and thanks ^_^!

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