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Published: 2005-11-07 04:03:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 202; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 4
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Description Bruises on her heart
she says he has no feelings and
at the same time she likes the way
he mockingly calls her baby

Rosebud on wind
she needs someone
someone to tell she's beautiful
Rosebud, rosebud indeed
she reaches out her slender arms
to touch the tips of the tallest trees
and she wants someone to tell her
that she doesn't need to be perfect

She's blooming all over lives
arresting all of the navy skies
officially someone who deserves
to spoil in a peaceful slumber
she's someone who should just have her way
in every passing day

No one in this fearful world
should ever have to lie to be perfect
and I'm right here telling
my rosebud
that she's beautiful.
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Comments: 23

LOvedy0uFrMtheStARt [2006-02-05 22:21:06 +0000 UTC]

awww that is so sweet

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francees In reply to LOvedy0uFrMtheStARt [2006-02-06 03:46:27 +0000 UTC]

its honest. if you have a spare moment to look at my page, it would be appriciated

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Mystieka-Senko [2005-11-15 16:59:59 +0000 UTC]

Loved it, Really beautifull ^^

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francees In reply to Mystieka-Senko [2005-11-16 03:07:15 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much <3

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Kirjailija [2005-11-15 16:44:39 +0000 UTC]

That was a beautiful peice, VERY well done!

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francees In reply to Kirjailija [2005-11-16 03:06:57 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Kirjailija In reply to francees [2005-11-16 03:22:44 +0000 UTC]

my pleasure ^^

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realitybox [2005-11-10 00:34:18 +0000 UTC]

Wow.....Had to read this one twice. The last four lines are just so powerful. Very, very nicely written, Franni.

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francees In reply to realitybox [2005-11-11 00:05:59 +0000 UTC]

thanks so much sol it means the world to me.

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realitybox In reply to francees [2005-11-12 19:49:13 +0000 UTC]

No problem

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frankienexus [2005-11-08 19:39:28 +0000 UTC]

this has love in every word, every sentence
it glows with it
made me quiet, made me sigh

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francees In reply to frankienexus [2005-11-09 04:22:45 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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brittany-SoKissMe [2005-11-08 12:05:04 +0000 UTC]

*tear*..........*tear*tear*tear* I don't deserve that. It's too nice.

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francees In reply to brittany-SoKissMe [2005-11-09 04:22:18 +0000 UTC]

i meant every word.

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stixNstones [2005-11-07 23:34:54 +0000 UTC]

lol its very pretty

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francees In reply to stixNstones [2005-11-07 23:36:57 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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stixNstones In reply to francees [2005-11-07 23:39:24 +0000 UTC]

np

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diablong-buang [2005-11-07 16:52:26 +0000 UTC]

loved the lines

She's blooming all over lives
arresting all of the navy skies

overall it's such a nice poem

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francees In reply to diablong-buang [2005-11-07 23:36:19 +0000 UTC]

thank you for the comments

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chickacherrycolakiss [2005-11-07 08:35:01 +0000 UTC]

AWWWWW this is SO bloody sweet i love it!!!!! it actually brought a tear to my eye to be honest... lol

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francees In reply to chickacherrycolakiss [2005-11-07 23:36:01 +0000 UTC]

awe thanks! it means a lot to me.

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d3viantpoet [2005-11-07 06:29:06 +0000 UTC]

dis is THE NICEST poem i've read in deviantArt so far. beautiful!

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francees In reply to d3viantpoet [2005-11-07 23:35:27 +0000 UTC]

wow thanks so much

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