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Darksoulwoof [2007-12-05 18:27:07 +0000 UTC]

;; how's name in on the stone?......but keep it up!

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LottaChan [2007-09-25 14:00:40 +0000 UTC]

This one is really cool^^...The lighting is REALLY awesome
!!!..Whens the next pag going out?..^^.. D

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NinjaAlchemisthXc [2007-09-20 00:08:41 +0000 UTC]

I want to marry that lightning. Seriously, that's just awesome.
And I lvoe how there's a sort of aura coming off the memorial stone.
And that last panel is tre cool.
I think this page might be my favorite.

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r3b3lliousr3b3l [2007-09-06 17:13:35 +0000 UTC]

You HAVE gotten better at shading/toning ^^ (Though I'll admit right now it's hard to see because the computers at school SUCK!)

I love Naruto's gravity-defying hair Even when it rains, it stick up, kukuku. He looks good in the first panel, all sad-like and hating the rain Awww, *cuddles Naru-chan*

I like the lightning in the background, and the way you set up the panels. You're getting better at panel placement, too ^^ But yeah, the background with the lightning pretty much going through the entire page is made of win.

And Naruto looks so depressed while he's walking! Looks like he wants to kick a pebble and pout and stuff, awww! He's so cute! The poor thing

I REALLY like the effect on the bottom panel, how it's COMPLETELY black except for Naruto and the Memorial stone. As if he can't see anything but that, I really like how you pulled that off. And the "why" is really awesome, too, cause it's like a question being blown away by the wind. I love it

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Okami-ttebayo [2007-09-05 15:31:11 +0000 UTC]

defintely improving!! also, you should be sleeping at such an hour!! *pout*

then again, we wouldn't have this page... *sigh* sad one, really.

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spazfroggie [2007-09-04 02:57:06 +0000 UTC]

I think you are improving. This manga is good for you!

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Blue-Feather-BF [2007-09-03 07:28:00 +0000 UTC]

TT_TT *sob* reminds me to that sad fic...

btw... I like the toning O___O !!

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cristalcat101 [2007-09-01 20:13:02 +0000 UTC]

love the rain scene... so nice...

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FawkesFeather [2007-09-01 19:40:20 +0000 UTC]

Whoa...the lightning...*stares in awe* I really like it. You've done a really good job with the shadow and light and mood. But it makes me so sad to see Naruto so sad.

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Deathklove [2007-09-01 17:44:42 +0000 UTC]

I love rain and mostly hate rain it makes me sad

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chibianderchan [2007-09-01 12:40:48 +0000 UTC]

Frack, that lightning is wicked cool in the background. Nicely done. I like the outlines on Naruto in the first and third panels of him. You really have the effect of shadowed eyes down, too. It looks really good!

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