TerraScythe [2005-12-19 08:47:42 +0000 UTC]
That was an awesome story!! It seriously needs to be made into a cartoon, it was brilliant.
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foodpsycho [2005-12-18 23:13:36 +0000 UTC]
Yeah it did move kinda fast, although that's because I had to stick to a word limit.
Thanks everyone for your comments!
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pigeonpyro [2005-12-18 11:03:06 +0000 UTC]
Wow, i love the ending! And it's was kind of confusing, but that wa because it moc=ved kind of fast, you were trying to explai the history and how things worked there, while also trying to tell the story of waht was happening, and that was kind of confusing, but i got the point! Anyways, i like it, great sotry, great imagination it in,it's just really good!!
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