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fonz99 — The extent of my poetry
Published: 2009-07-24 07:16:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 127; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 7
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Description Two all beef patties,
              
                 Special sauce,

                                                            Lettuce,

Cheese,


                Pickles,

                                                            Onions,


On a sesame seed bun.
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Comments: 2

Nicephorus [2009-07-27 16:02:45 +0000 UTC]

There's a certain elegant simplicity to this work. The surprise of the 'special sauce', so tantalisingly mysterious, and on to the litany of ingredients, echoing the catologue conventions of ancient epic poetry and finally ending with the plaintive cry that has echoed throughout human history - the need for a sesame bun. I think it's inspired.

I'm also hungry now.

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fonz99 In reply to Nicephorus [2009-07-28 03:54:34 +0000 UTC]

You have given me the encouragement I needed to keep my poetry career open.

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