Toad900 [2017-01-12 01:14:31 +0000 UTC]
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The drawing style is done really well and gives off a feeling of cuteness. The colors on Tithy are simple, yet effective. And the shading is done really well.The background might be a little bit too simplistic, but as a first time, it's always good to start off simple and continue improving. Another thing that could be an optional improvement is making the necklace more 3 dimensional by making the circle more leaned towards the right. But as it is, it's fine as it is. One more nitpick is that the gloves could have a little bit more shading. But other than those nitpicks, you did a pretty good job for a first time on Paint Tool Sai. Keep on practicing! :3
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Toad900 [2017-01-12 01:16:10 +0000 UTC]
Nice work! ^W^ I wrote down a critique explaining my thoughts. (It's been a while since I done one of these.)
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Floofy-Chu In reply to Toad900 [2017-01-12 01:16:57 +0000 UTC]
I'll look into it!