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Published: 2011-01-21 13:40:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 1500; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 0
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Well it feels like a Just Jeans poster ^__^Carrying on with my new rule of trying to post at least one picture the same day as the shoot, here's one of today's pickings . . . . . went to a local industrial area late evening to test out some new lighting equipment, happy with the results and I got a new model too which is always fun and challenging!
Fun was had . . .
Edited in Lightroom only, no Photoshop.
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(Here it is as promised.. sorry I'm late.)
Let me start out by saying I think this shot is wonderful and vary well done but having said that this is a critique so here goes.. The lighting is great I can tell it was thought out and sculpts the model perfectly. The shot is neither over/under exposed nor is really flawed in any technical way but I think it could have done better with either a bit more or less of the model in the shot it feels like it's in a bit of an odd middle ground but again it's by no means bad these are just some small ideas to help in the future. It doesn't feel like it's over edited, or really edited at all which is good it has quite a natural feel with I seldom see now a-days. The background is interesting but it might have helped the feel of the shot if it was slightly lessened or blurred, it's not necessarily over powering but it seems a bit off.. The model's pose is great it definitely has feeling and some thought behind it but again feels natural in some way like it could have been a spontaneous shot. this is getting really technical but his left arm is a bit off like it may be to far out again if there were more of him to see that might not be the case.. The shot it's self feels a bit heavy on the right side almost like its missing something on the left or maybe the model could have been a tiny bit more in the middle. Over all, the shot is, as I said, great these are just some ideas. I would love to see more of this style and of this model In this artist's opinion you did a great job keep it up!
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hehe reminds me of a just jeans poster too
love the lighting!
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(will post critique soon cant type much now laptop batt dieing...) great shot! im glad you, like me, only use lightroom it makes the shots seem more natural. shots like this look line the subject is in my screen!
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Oh that would be great, thanks!
I will use Lightroom to alter the processing and I occasionally use Photoshop but I try to keep that to an absolute minimum unless it's paid work or something I'm going to try and get published . . . . game cosplay almost always has PS for effect ^__^
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