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fernknits — 012. Dead Wrong -- I wish you
Published: 2014-10-14 20:50:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 122; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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Description I wish you 
you were real
real and true 
true to me
and you were  
you were kind
that one time  
I knew you
you were good
good to me 
and I knew
you could be
be that way
way again
I wish I
had not been
been so dead
so dead wrong.
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Comments: 2

nosedivve [2014-10-18 16:16:59 +0000 UTC]

I really like how the words repeated onto the next line. It really gives the poem an interesting sense of rhythm and meaning.

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fernknits In reply to nosedivve [2014-10-18 23:19:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you -- that's what I was hoping for!

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