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Published: 2014-05-12 21:10:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 10220; Favourites: 318; Downloads: 167
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man... if u accept my proposal, u'll capture exactly the essence of the world and characters in my book... Please, lets talk cause THIS IS WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUT motherfl*ckas!Β
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Es como ..una fusiΓ³n de fallout con Death space! es ideal XD porque amΓ© esos dos juegos asΓ que ame el concepto.Β
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I swear, hoods in the future would be awesome in general.
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I'd love to see someone make a suit/costume of this.
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That'd be awesome! Thanks for commenting!Β
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Otros excelentes diseΓ±os manin. Me alegro de leer los comentarios que estas recibiendo de excelentes artistas, nada que agregar de mi parte, sigua asi palante.
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Muchas gracias, viejo! Tu eres otro de los que estan siempre pendientes!
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observations* cirtiques...
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lol
Well. I've watched your progress from some time now and I think you had a huge jump. But I feel that your getting yourself a little bit stuck on some fundamentals stuff. For example I've always felt that your values are way too dark. Try doing stuff from middle value. It will make you build light and shadow at the same time, and the shapes will be more visible to the eye at a distance (which is super important). Also try giving it more definition. I bet you're pretty fast on this kind of concepts. But try on spending a week or more in an image. You'll see the change.
Try listening to you brain and eye telling you that it isn't finished. You might want to rush in to the end. But if you keep on gettin that way, you'll just keep on doing unfinished looking images. Get a photo reference and try on doing it as a real thing. It's not that I try to control your "style". But realism and pushing on definition is an awesome way to level up fundamental issues.
Hope it works. And... I don't want to say this because I think I'm a "know it all". But some time ago I had the same issue that you are having now. And I got the same advice from another artist.
Keep it up man.
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First of all, thanks a lot for taking your time to do this critique! I appreciate it a lot as well as I appreciate that you're always there to watch out for my progress
Yes. I totally have that problem of the rushing thing. I can't spend that much time on an image without loosing interest. Got to try to do that. One week is kinda long, tho. lol I'll try my best. Will spend some more time finding the right composition or sketches to work then as much as I can. Look forward to it, bro!
Thanks again, man!Β
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