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MarshmallowFudgeUp [2013-10-06 19:56:28 +0000 UTC]
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All in all it's a pretty piece that had subtle beauty. The one thing that I think could be worked on is the blurriness from the back of the flower. I also feel the same with the stem. I feel since the flower is the main focus point, it should easily pop out and attract the eye. I love the blurred background, however- it works. I really like the yellow underneath the flower and in the bottom-left corner. I'm a little curious- are those also flowers? Weeds? Maybe you should make the yellow-orange go into focus as well (but it's only a suggestion) Thanks for sharing~
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Fant0me In reply to MarshmallowFudgeUp [2013-10-10 00:09:33 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for your detailed feedback . If I understand, you would have prefered to have all the parts of the flower sharp? That's the compromise I had to make in order to have a nice background.For the yellow, it's an another flower. This picture was taken in a field of flowersé
MarshmallowFudgeUp In reply to Fant0me [2013-10-10 00:43:27 +0000 UTC]
I understand- and it's cool.
No problem with the feedback- and don't take some of it seriously. I'm a growing artist like many, and it's just my opinion
Fant0me In reply to MarshmallowFudgeUp [2013-10-10 22:56:34 +0000 UTC]
And appreciate it
MarshmallowFudgeUp In reply to Fant0me [2013-10-10 23:08:07 +0000 UTC]
Of course
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