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Published: 2015-05-23 14:56:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 13530; Favourites: 109; Downloads: 0
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Description Ludwig's POV

Through the mirror above the dashboard, I saw Alfred and (Y/N) against the left side of the car, gazing out the window, looking at all the foreign markets, clothing stores, and restaurants. 

I couldn't help but look at (Y/N). The sunlight helped her look even more beautiful. I smiled and a blush dusted my cheeks as my thoughts went...further. (What are you thinking about, Luddy?) 

"Ahem." 

I looked over at my bruder*. He glanced over at me, holding a gaze for a couple of seconds. "Was ist los, Bruder?"* I commented.

Gilbert shook his head. "Das eigentliche Problem ist, was ist los mit dir?"*


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Reader's POV

I glanced between Ludwig and Gilbert, talking in German. I wish I knew what they were talking about. All I could pick up on was "bruder" and "ist" which I believe means is. 

"Hey, Al. What do you think they're talking about?" I whispered. 

From my peripheral vision, I saw Alfred shrug his shoulders. "I have no clue. Hey, (Y/N). Do you think they got a McDonald's here, somewhere?" Alfred said, eagerly looking out the window. 

"Hmm...I have no clue but I'm hoping for a Starbucks, though." I giggled as Gilbird rested on my head.


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We soon arrived to what seemed to be the hotel. When the car was parked, we all got out. Gilbert jumped out saying, "Velcome to zhe Ritz-Carlton hotel!"

I looked up at it and my jaw hit the floor, or at least I thought it did. 

"Dude, this is AWESOME! Where are our rooms at?! Ah, man, I can't wait!" Alfred exclaimed, starting to run off before Ludwig grabbed him by the collar.

"Calm down. Zhis is a five-star hotel. No screaming, loud noises, and running. Got it?" Ludwig stated with venom in his voice, glaring the American down.

"Uhh, s-sure dude! Um...(Y/N), Luddy's being scary!" Alfred squeaked, practically pleading for help. 

"Alfred, listen to Ludwig." I mocked in a mother's voice, smirking devilishly, enjoying the torture Alfred was receiving. 'Ludwig actually looks like he wants to kill Alfie...' I giggled.

"Now, Luddy. Drop him~." Gilbert teasingly said, poking the taller blonde's cheek. Ludwig threw him a death glare before releasing Alfred. "Thank you God for letting me living another day." Alfred got on his knees, praying, making me laugh.

"Alright, that's enough of that. Let's go check in!" I said walking back to get my luggage.

Once inside, Alfred and I were both mesmerized by the elegant decor. Above us was another floor and chandeliers hung from the ceiling. It was hard to believe that this was a hotel and not some rich person's house.

Gilbert walked to the reception desk while Ludwig went three sharply, may I add, dressed men and said something in German. He then pointed to us and they came and to our bags away but Alfred was too busy 'exploring' the place to care...Not like he would anyway.

"Zwei Hotelzimmer. Unter den Namen 'Jones und (L/N)'."* Gilbert said to the receptionist, who enthusiastically gave him the keys after checking on the computer. 

"Danke." Gilbert said while he beckoned us to follow him. Once we were on our floor, Gilbert and Ludwig to the luggage from men. 

"Alright. Now that that's out the way, which is our rooms?" I asked.


~* Normal POV *~


"Zhe recepzionist said zhat Alfred's room is right here and jour's is...over there." Ludwig said, pointing that (Y/N)'s room was further down the hall.

"Let's start unpacking!" Alfred said enthusiastically.

"Jou know, Alfred has a point." Gilbert said, voice dripping with mischief. "Ja. Vhat are jou saying?" Ludwig glanced at his brother. 

"Hey, I'm just saying zhat zhey should unpack. And I bet," Gilbert placed a hand on (Y/N)'s shoulder. "Zhat zhey'll need help."

Ludwig threw a glare saying, 'What are you planning?'. "I'm gonna help (Y/N) and you can help Alfred."

(Y/N)'s eyes sparkled. "That's a great idea, Gil! That'll save some daylight. Let's get to it then, shall we?" (Y/N) said, grabbing her luggage, with Gilbert and Gilbird trailing behind her. 

"Cool! See ya dudes, later~!" Alfred said, before snatching his keys and practically breaking down the door. Before Gilbert disappeared into (Y/N)'s hotel room, Ludwig grabbed his arm.

"Vhat's vrong, bruder?" Gilbert evilly smirked. "Vhat are jou planning?" Ludwig said tightening his grip, while glaring Gilbert down.

"Nothing~! I vas just being generous." Gilbert smiled innocently. "Vhen have jou ever been 'generous'?" Ludwig said, voice dripping with venom.

"V-vhat? Jou don't believe me?" Gilbert faked being hurt. 

"Vhat. Are. Jou. Planning?" Ludwig repeated, darkly. 

Gilbert threw a hand up in air. "All I'm gonna do iz help (Y/N). I'm not going to do anyzhing." 

Ludwig sighed, releasing Gilbert's arm, allowing him to turn on his heel. When Gilbert reached the doorknob, he stopped. "Oh and Ludvig?"

"Ja?"

"Jou know I'll have to help her put her clothes and maybe, just maybe," Gilbert paused. 

"Her underwear~." He purred, before dashing into the room and locking it. Ludwig ran to the door and tried to open it, but to no avail.


~* Inside (Y/N)'s hotel room *~


"Hey, what's wrong?" (Y/N) said, hanging up some of her clothes. 

"Nothing." Gilbert smirked, looking out the peep-hole of the door to see his brother raging.

Then loud raps on the door were heard throughout the room. 

"You made Ludwig mad, didn't you?" (Y/N) shook her head, disappointed.

"Maybe~." Gilbert said.

"GILBERT! GET OUT HERE RIGHT NOW!" Ludwig shouted, through the door.

"But I'm helping (Y/N)~." He replied back.

"GGRRR!"

(Y/N) turned to Gilbert. "Hey. Instead of irritating your brother, why don't you, oh you know, actually help?"



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"So, where to now?" (Y/N) said, as the gang got back into Gilbert's (choice of car). Gilbert swiveled out the parking lot and got on the main road.

"Next up," Gilbert said, pushing the gas pedal harder. 

"Zhe Berlin Wall!!"
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Comments: 38

Queen-Victoria-the-t [2019-02-15 16:16:38 +0000 UTC]

Prussia get roasted.  No wonder why he'd end up in jail if he went to Cuba.  #GILGROWUP

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Puppymaster8 [2017-02-18 16:25:28 +0000 UTC]

I know you have your reasons to why you stoped writing your story and I can respect that but why DID you stop writing? I mean you're still active on DeviantArt so why can't you keep writing? Pardon me if I sound pushy or rude but just a simple answer couldn't hurt,right?

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ToffeeTops [2016-12-02 12:23:13 +0000 UTC]

  Update i beg

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Jelsa-and-books-rock [2016-10-06 00:45:15 +0000 UTC]

OMG GILBERT HAS THE BATMOBILE!!!!!!!!!!!! 

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Cyberkinn [2016-08-22 04:43:43 +0000 UTC]

Excuse me, could you finish this series please? I really love the way you write, it's inspired me to write my own fan fiction. ^°^ But I'd love to see what happens next.

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ugggghhhhh [2016-08-09 06:50:33 +0000 UTC]

Plz update

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AnimeCuteCake [2016-07-18 21:37:34 +0000 UTC]

auh <3 <3 <3 i love this story so much 
so freaking much aaah please continue it
you write great <3

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Batwomanthefirst [2016-06-22 03:29:02 +0000 UTC]

Please update!!!

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nicog11 [2016-05-17 03:12:22 +0000 UTC]

 please more i want to know what ludwig would do to make reader chan love even more toward him......    please.....        

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messed-up-cinderella [2016-04-25 12:53:33 +0000 UTC]

More pwease!!!!

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pride-herd-pack [2016-04-20 00:03:37 +0000 UTC]

Lovee it x3 contnue pease

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SnowyBlizzardWolf [2016-01-23 00:55:23 +0000 UTC]

Continue I beg you!!!!

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EmoBunny11 [2016-01-10 02:46:57 +0000 UTC]

:3 NIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIICEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

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just-a-simple-otaku [2016-01-06 05:48:10 +0000 UTC]

Awwwwwwww please continue it!!!

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IcywolfPines [2015-11-30 02:36:47 +0000 UTC]

Awesome, but not like Gil XD
I love your story! I'm sorry to hear that you won't be continuing it, no pressure or anything, but I was really hoping you would since I'm running out of fanfics to read.


Its amazing, I could never write something this talented. :3

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chelseavampireknight [2015-06-27 03:10:39 +0000 UTC]

When is the next part coming out? I can't wait to see what happens next

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FallOutGirl21 In reply to chelseavampireknight [2015-06-30 03:47:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the support and nice words~! But, sadly, it'll probably be a while until I upload anything because I haven't really been inspired enough to write. I'm sorry if I disappointed you.

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DarkLucario23 In reply to FallOutGirl21 [2015-09-15 18:27:49 +0000 UTC]

Well, at least you say you'll continue it, so for me it's ok!! Go on, I just LOVE Ludwig and this is awesome (not like Prussia but still)

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chelseavampireknight In reply to FallOutGirl21 [2015-07-16 23:32:01 +0000 UTC]

Its alright, it wasn't a no so I have hope and will wait until you get your spark again to write Until then thank you for replying and have a good one! 

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ilovemyself12345 [2015-06-01 12:11:54 +0000 UTC]

           

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FallOutGirl21 In reply to ilovemyself12345 [2015-06-01 18:27:55 +0000 UTC]

         

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ilovemyself12345 In reply to FallOutGirl21 [2015-06-02 11:03:24 +0000 UTC]

I have no idea how to wink inn real life but I am a pro here

               

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FallOutGirl21 In reply to ilovemyself12345 [2015-06-02 19:18:48 +0000 UTC]

       




I love jacksepticeye....                

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ilovemyself12345 In reply to FallOutGirl21 [2015-06-04 12:13:51 +0000 UTC]

I can see why...

                 

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FallOutGirl21 In reply to ilovemyself12345 [2015-06-11 05:06:04 +0000 UTC]

                       

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salma1D In reply to FallOutGirl21 [2015-07-07 06:01:44 +0000 UTC]

who won't love that irish accent?   and markimoo~  

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Whybot221 [2015-05-28 08:38:32 +0000 UTC]

love it

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FallOutGirl21 In reply to Whybot221 [2015-05-28 11:02:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you~!!

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Whybot221 In reply to FallOutGirl21 [2015-05-28 12:04:55 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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KeliLindsey [2015-05-24 11:46:34 +0000 UTC]

pffffft Gilbert is a total ass xD

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FallOutGirl21 In reply to KeliLindsey [2015-05-24 14:02:10 +0000 UTC]

He is, isn't he? XD

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Whybot221 In reply to FallOutGirl21 [2015-05-28 08:38:11 +0000 UTC]

but thats why we love him

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FallOutGirl21 In reply to Whybot221 [2015-05-28 11:00:52 +0000 UTC]

Very true!

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Whybot221 In reply to FallOutGirl21 [2015-05-28 12:05:03 +0000 UTC]

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KirasLaugh [2015-05-24 02:35:29 +0000 UTC]

This was Awesome!!!
I love this story!!!!!!!!

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FallOutGirl21 In reply to KirasLaugh [2015-05-24 03:42:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you~!

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Soul1991 [2015-05-23 23:04:40 +0000 UTC]

Amazing

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FallOutGirl21 In reply to Soul1991 [2015-05-23 23:51:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much~!! I'm glad you liked it~!!

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