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Published: 2009-09-06 03:48:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 1428; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 0
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Description Model and mua: Natalie Lucas

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Comments: 6

Astroluc [2010-03-10 05:56:02 +0000 UTC]

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a short critique (and when I finished my original typing of this it was only 80 words out of 100 so I had to add this; but I think my critique is fair and reasoned regardless of the word count... what do you think?)--

Cons: the line between the background and the floor is really distracting and the fact that the subject/model is dead center is kinda boring.

Pros: Model has a great pose; Wonderful contrast between the neutral grey and the vibrant red of the coat. Great exposure.

Suggestions: Even if you like this composition (centered), perhaps you can "spice" it up by experimenting with changing the direction of the light-source, or perhaps the angle of the shot.

Synopsis: Nice!

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MissSunflower [2009-11-17 00:44:01 +0000 UTC]

really good!

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FrozenStarART [2009-09-07 19:53:08 +0000 UTC]

I love this! The red coat really makes the model stand out with the overall desaturated background.

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fae-photography In reply to FrozenStarART [2009-09-10 03:21:15 +0000 UTC]

cheers

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ipsiepixie [2009-09-06 03:48:41 +0000 UTC]

Nice work!

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fae-photography In reply to ipsiepixie [2009-09-10 03:23:15 +0000 UTC]

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