Astroluc [2010-03-10 05:56:02 +0000 UTC]
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a short critique (and when I finished my original typing of this it was only 80 words out of 100 so I had to add this; but I think my critique is fair and reasoned regardless of the word count... what do you think?)--Cons: the line between the background and the floor is really distracting and the fact that the subject/model is dead center is kinda boring.Pros: Model has a great pose; Wonderful contrast between the neutral grey and the vibrant red of the coat. Great exposure. Suggestions: Even if you like this composition (centered), perhaps you can "spice" it up by experimenting with changing the direction of the light-source, or perhaps the angle of the shot. Synopsis: Nice!
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MissSunflower [2009-11-17 00:44:01 +0000 UTC]
really good!
FrozenStarART [2009-09-07 19:53:08 +0000 UTC]
I love this! The red coat really makes the model stand out with the overall desaturated background.
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fae-photography In reply to FrozenStarART [2009-09-10 03:21:15 +0000 UTC]
cheers
ipsiepixie [2009-09-06 03:48:41 +0000 UTC]
Nice work!
fae-photography In reply to ipsiepixie [2009-09-10 03:23:15 +0000 UTC]