Comments: 338
ProudPridelander [2016-08-06 07:02:40 +0000 UTC]
I WISH SO BADLY that this was a song!
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Gentle-Shadow [2015-01-01 01:11:11 +0000 UTC]
May i contribute this to my group?
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devilaphoenix [2014-07-29 12:42:09 +0000 UTC]
Oh, I just love this. And by 'love' i mean A LOT. It's just... beautiful. Simply beautiful.
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devilaphoenix In reply to EverBroken [2014-11-09 10:51:16 +0000 UTC]
I imagined it as a song, you know? It'll sound marvellous. A melanholic song like this would sound great if sang by soeone like Marilyn Manson.
By the way, do you know who he is? Cuz I love him.
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DayLightenedDark [2013-07-10 21:04:18 +0000 UTC]
I really loved this. It all meant so much. It showed how love can hurt, which happened for Edward. Beautiful writing, words, and images. Great job!
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x-avoxion-o [2013-05-06 14:29:43 +0000 UTC]
This is...amazing.
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RomanceFreak In reply to EverBroken [2013-04-20 19:41:25 +0000 UTC]
It's all good.
Oooh, that's good! good luck finding a band that will do that for you!! I'm crossing my fingers for you!
You're welcome.
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LelaDukes [2012-08-02 06:54:51 +0000 UTC]
I'm not a poet, but I appreciate poetry and this is so beautiful, it really speaks to me. I love this so much. It is a literary masterpiece.
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animelover362 [2012-04-11 19:17:12 +0000 UTC]
This is wonderful. You are an amazing writer and these are some beautiful words!
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noobyzgir350 [2011-12-21 21:43:52 +0000 UTC]
something so dark is so beautiful ,this poem is great
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harpseal16 [2011-12-13 21:58:33 +0000 UTC]
BEAUTIFUL!
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Marius-Drake [2011-08-17 11:54:19 +0000 UTC]
It's so intense that sometimes we can forget that pain can be seductive. Really like this, could you check out a couple of my poems? I'm looking for feedback from fellow poets.
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Waterboy909 [2011-06-23 19:29:06 +0000 UTC]
Wow. This was wonderful. It practically moved me to tears. Amazing job.
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Waterboy909 In reply to EverBroken [2011-06-23 21:53:32 +0000 UTC]
No problem! I'm a big fan of the movie also. This poem brings a whole new outlook on it for me.
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ShellBell17 [2011-04-28 01:55:12 +0000 UTC]
Holy Crap . This Is Beautiful .
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