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Published: 2005-02-26 08:43:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 8428; Favourites: 383; Downloads: 58
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Description I know if I touch him
It's gonna hurt
I know if I hold him
It will only make it worse
If I pull him close, wrapped in my arms
I know that it will only bring me harm
He'll slice me through with his wounded eyes
Bleed me to death with his silent cries
Slit my throat with his pleading gaze
Scar me with his mournful ways
I can't get close, can't let him in
He'll cut me and I'll bleed within
It's happening all over again
I try, won't cry
As the knives go in

If I pull him close, it will bring me pain
But to push away simply brings the same
The hurt in his eyes when I turn away
Is a price that I'm unwilling to pay
The hurt so deep when I reject his plea
I don't mind the pain, as long as it's in me
So cut me deep, my dear, then sleep
For I will bleed, I'll do what I can
It's like loving Edward Scissorhands

I know if I love him
The blood will flow
I know if I trust him
My heart rate will slow
If I hold him tight, erase all his fears
I know it will scar me down through the years
He'll pierce my skin with his tender lips
And dice my flesh with gentle fingertips
His beautiful voice will stab my heart
Dripping with pain, it will shred my soul apart
I got close, I let him in
It's happened all over again
I tried, never cried
As the knives went in

If I pull him close, it will bring me pain
But to push away simply brings the same
The hurt in his eyes when I turn away
Is a price that I'm unwilling to pay
The hurt so deep when I reject his plea
I don't mind the pain, as long as it's in me
So cut me deep, my dear, then sleep
For I will bleed, I'll do what I can
It's like loving Edward Scissorhands

Loving him
Like razor blades on skin
Sharp and tangible
With a touch like sin
Metal
Blood lust
Lips, crimson stained
Settled
For the love rust
Resistance all drained

If I pull him close, it will bring me pain
But to push away simply brings the same
The hurt in his eyes when I turn away
Is a price that I'm unwilling to pay
The hurt so deep when I reject his plea
I don't mind the pain, as long as it's in me
So cut me deep, my dear, then sleep
For I will bleed, I'll do what I can
It's like loving Edward Scissorhands

I'll love, I'll bleed
I'll even die
But, my dear, you'll never see me cry
Cut so deep by your demands...
It's like loving Edward Scissorhands

Date written: 2-25-04, 10:11 am
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Comments: 338

ProudPridelander [2016-08-06 07:02:40 +0000 UTC]

I WISH SO BADLY that this was a song!

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Luvliartlady In reply to ProudPridelander [2021-03-19 19:02:35 +0000 UTC]

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ProudPridelander In reply to Luvliartlady [2021-03-19 20:51:32 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE the movie with all my heart!

Oh, and I’m sorry if you’re in pain...

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Luvliartlady In reply to ProudPridelander [2021-03-20 00:55:47 +0000 UTC]

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ProudPridelander In reply to Luvliartlady [2021-03-20 01:00:52 +0000 UTC]

Oh, alright. That’s good!

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lalarose311 [2015-06-16 14:16:48 +0000 UTC]

beautiful very beautiful

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Christi317 [2015-01-24 05:18:06 +0000 UTC]

At first I thought this was a poem, but then I noticed the chorus and.... There you go!! i love this!! But who do you think (if you could,) want them to sing this?

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Gentle-Shadow [2015-01-01 01:11:11 +0000 UTC]

May i contribute this to my group?

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Gentle-Shadow [2015-01-01 01:10:48 +0000 UTC]

YES

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devilaphoenix [2014-07-29 12:42:09 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I just love this. And by 'love' i mean A LOT. It's just... beautiful. Simply beautiful.

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EverBroken In reply to devilaphoenix [2014-11-07 22:30:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!!!Β  Β  That means a lot to me!Β 

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devilaphoenix In reply to EverBroken [2014-11-09 10:51:16 +0000 UTC]

I imagined it as a song, you know? It'll sound marvellous. A melanholic song like this would sound great if sang by soeone like Marilyn Manson.
By the way, do you know who he is? Cuz I love him.

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DayLightenedDark [2013-07-10 21:04:18 +0000 UTC]

I really loved this. It all meant so much. It showed how love can hurt, which happened for Edward. Beautiful writing, words, and images. Great job!

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EverBroken In reply to DayLightenedDark [2014-06-10 17:48:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!Β  I haven't been on here in almost a year (obviously) but it always encourages me to see such kind words about my writings!Β 

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DayLightenedDark In reply to EverBroken [2014-06-12 20:37:00 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! It was a great piece!

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x-avoxion-o [2013-05-06 14:29:43 +0000 UTC]

This is...amazing.

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EverBroken In reply to x-avoxion-o [2014-06-10 17:48:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!Β  Sorry for the delay in response!Β  I haven't been on here in over a year but it was lovely to see someone appreciates my writing!

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RomanceFreak [2012-10-22 07:13:29 +0000 UTC]

This is so beautiful. I just barely saw the movie, and now I really know what the story is all about. Oh, I felt so heartbroken for poor Edward. This is a very stunning, deep, poem. Great work.

Have you ever thought about making it into a song, just curious?

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EverBroken In reply to RomanceFreak [2013-04-19 19:08:36 +0000 UTC]

I'm so sorry I haven't replied before now! I fear I neglect to get on here as often as I should! It's always pleasant to come back to comments such as yours though. I have thought of making it into a song at some point in time, maybe if the right band came along with the right music and they'd be willing to turn it into a song. Thank you so much for the kind words.

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RomanceFreak In reply to EverBroken [2013-04-20 19:41:25 +0000 UTC]

It's all good.

Oooh, that's good! good luck finding a band that will do that for you!! I'm crossing my fingers for you!

You're welcome.

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EverBroken In reply to RomanceFreak [2013-04-21 23:15:51 +0000 UTC]

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LelaDukes [2012-08-02 06:54:51 +0000 UTC]

I'm not a poet, but I appreciate poetry and this is so beautiful, it really speaks to me. I love this so much. It is a literary masterpiece.

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EverBroken In reply to LelaDukes [2012-08-18 18:51:10 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thank you so much for the kind words! That means the most to me.

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CrimsonScissorhands [2012-07-18 19:48:58 +0000 UTC]

I love this so much! It' such a deep poem. I love that movie. Good job.

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EverBroken In reply to CrimsonScissorhands [2012-07-25 14:00:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! I really appreciate it!

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CrimsonScissorhands In reply to EverBroken [2012-07-25 18:30:39 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome. ^^

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Camoline [2012-06-02 14:34:02 +0000 UTC]

Edward Scissorhands is one of my favourite movies of all time. Everything is so deep and meaningful, something that ought to be buried in memory forever. This poem matches the movie That's worth something.

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EverBroken In reply to Camoline [2012-06-13 18:31:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you SO much! That really means a lot! I tried to think of the movie when I wrote this and all the different feelings that movie gave me.

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animelover362 [2012-04-11 19:17:12 +0000 UTC]

This is wonderful. You are an amazing writer and these are some beautiful words!

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EverBroken In reply to animelover362 [2012-05-15 13:01:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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noobyzgir350 [2011-12-21 21:43:52 +0000 UTC]

something so dark is so beautiful ,this poem is great

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EverBroken In reply to noobyzgir350 [2011-12-30 21:53:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much, I'm glad you found it to be beautiful!

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harpseal16 [2011-12-13 21:58:33 +0000 UTC]

BEAUTIFUL!

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EverBroken In reply to harpseal16 [2011-12-30 21:53:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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RochiPelekai [2011-11-05 20:33:10 +0000 UTC]

Incredibly beautiful and profound. I feel really identified with your poem at this moment, I feel very alone because of two idiots. But love the person who don't cares about you is so... how I can describe it, interesting? dolorous?

Well, I only sign to say you are amazingly tallented and an excellent poetess & writer! Really, you have to work like one! *_* I envy you! XD

A big hug and I hope you keep writing!

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EverBroken In reply to RochiPelekai [2011-11-17 17:00:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you SO much! It's such a difficult emotion to deal with when you have feelings for someone that aren't returned. It can be very frustrating!

You are so very kind with your words! So very encouraging and makes me want to try to write something new!

Thank you for the ! You are so generous!!!!

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RochiPelekai In reply to EverBroken [2011-11-17 18:33:36 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you want to write more and try new styles because you have a true talent for this! You know how to splash your feelings in poetry And please! You're welcome ^^

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EverBroken In reply to RochiPelekai [2011-11-19 00:56:47 +0000 UTC]

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Marius-Drake [2011-08-17 11:54:19 +0000 UTC]

It's so intense that sometimes we can forget that pain can be seductive. Really like this, could you check out a couple of my poems? I'm looking for feedback from fellow poets.

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Waterboy909 [2011-06-23 19:29:06 +0000 UTC]

Wow. This was wonderful. It practically moved me to tears. Amazing job.

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EverBroken In reply to Waterboy909 [2011-06-23 21:32:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! I really appreciate the feedback! And thank you for the !

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Waterboy909 In reply to EverBroken [2011-06-23 21:53:32 +0000 UTC]

No problem! I'm a big fan of the movie also. This poem brings a whole new outlook on it for me.

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EverBroken In reply to Waterboy909 [2011-06-24 19:35:41 +0000 UTC]

I am as well. I always found it to be so beautiful and tragic. Thanks again!

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Crazy4Wonderland [2011-06-05 01:44:12 +0000 UTC]

*Claps* Bravo! Encore! Magnifico! It's wonderful! Faving! <3

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EverBroken In reply to Crazy4Wonderland [2011-06-08 15:56:02 +0000 UTC]

Awwww! Thank you SO much! You're much too kind! Thank you so much for the !

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ShellBell17 [2011-04-28 01:55:12 +0000 UTC]

Holy Crap . This Is Beautiful .

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EverBroken In reply to ShellBell17 [2011-04-29 17:42:47 +0000 UTC]

Well, thank you! So much! And thank you for the !

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MrToddsNightingale [2011-01-05 21:49:38 +0000 UTC]

OMG O_O my heart stopped every now and then
great job! really....

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EverBroken In reply to MrToddsNightingale [2011-01-06 16:22:42 +0000 UTC]

Well thank you! That means a lot, and I'm glad it made your heart stop! Well, not literally, cuz that would be bad.

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Fallenpeach [2010-12-25 06:12:48 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely amazing!!! It made me cry.

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