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Tokogawa [2008-07-08 07:32:24 +0000 UTC]
Very nice and very funny. I see a lot of nuanced and well, out there style. Its very cartoonish and the singers expression is just so full of energy and like a better commenter said seemed more like a rock concert expression. Very nice though, very nice.
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huski77 [2007-04-19 13:25:02 +0000 UTC]
After seeing that flyer, me being a jazz pianist. I'd definitely show up to dat event
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Word-From-Bird [2007-03-11 14:12:33 +0000 UTC]
thats sure means a thing
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betoo [2007-02-05 19:05:15 +0000 UTC]
I really liked, it has a nice style and it really makes me want to go to a jazz fest xD
If you could make the text por visible woul be perfect
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jethrosketch [2006-03-02 05:24:39 +0000 UTC]
the style is just amazing i love the way you 've done this its awesome!!!!
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DirtyPiGGuin17 [2005-12-26 06:03:00 +0000 UTC]
the clarinet player's hands aren't in the right places either, but it's still good.
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acbunny [2005-12-13 03:47:54 +0000 UTC]
Absolutaly wonderful! i'll totally go to a jazz fes after seeing this poster! it makes jazz look fun! I just love the animated look of this poster ^^ so alive and full of energy! SO different from the every-day jazz posters! ur stuff always amazes me~~~
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Impichi [2005-11-30 19:18:53 +0000 UTC]
hahahaha... nice... I like their attitude!
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StupidAngel [2005-11-27 04:39:30 +0000 UTC]
o.o
that's awesome!
if it were a real advertising poster, i would SO go to canada just to see the jazz fest and steal this off of a bilboard, or something <.<;;;
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MrDSir [2005-11-26 01:47:40 +0000 UTC]
Hmmm, since I'm in quite a few design classes, and you have advanced critique on, I'm gonna let you have it . I apologize in advance.
First the illustration: Your drawing does an excellent job of capturing a lot of energy, that of which one would hope to find in a Jazz Festival. The one person (Ryu91) saying it looks like a rock festival poster from the man's expression may suggest that the poster is sending a strange message, but that would probably be cleared up at a meeting with the client. Also, the upsidedown reed may be a problem as people who go to jazz festivals may be saavy on that sort of thing, but again a minor problem. On a side note, the singer looks a lot like the guy from the rage series, abiet in a much better mood.
As for the design side of the poster (text etc.): I really like how the signer's right hand almost makes a frame for the headline, maybe that'd be something to play with. You're right about the text being a little hard to read in the darker brown, but changing the text to white in the dark brown may not be the best way to fix the problem as it would mess with reading flow. Since the background colors you've chosen are essentially yellow and orange (brown is low value, low intensity orange, trust me) it may be a better option to use a blue or green for the text. Even using the color of the figure's clothing may work, they stand out well from the background. The rag (right edge) of the text with all the band's names is quite rough, but was probably unavoidable because you were listing bands and can't really hypenate too much. The singer's chord covers some of the band's names, prehaps playing with the paragraph shape or using bands with sorter names through that section would allieviate this issue. Very good font choice though. The sponser's logo's may be a little bigger than they need to be, the corner they're in looks a little weird.
Despite all the rabble above though, very good job. (I apologize if all the stuff mentioned above were already mentioned.)
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lemoned-starfish [2005-11-26 01:22:08 +0000 UTC]
Well, even tho it isn't real....it's still really cool.
AWESOME JOB!
--Jess
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LipWriting [2005-11-25 19:46:10 +0000 UTC]
Interestingly enough you can play clarinet with the reed backwards like that. It just sounds a little funny... I like their shirt patterns.
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Letz [2005-11-25 08:43:19 +0000 UTC]
ur from toronto? koo.. which skool are u at?
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Letz In reply to Ethereal-Mind [2005-11-26 02:18:54 +0000 UTC]
yeah i am from sheridan
taking lovely animation =S
lol wad yaer are u IN?
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BludonutKing [2005-11-25 05:08:23 +0000 UTC]
As an art director I think you did a great job on this assignment and your right, the only change would probably be making the text white. I also like how the singer is pointing to the headline with both hands. The headline might also look good if it was a lot larger and overlapped his hand.
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OrlySunja [2005-11-25 04:16:59 +0000 UTC]
this is amazing--bringing the viewer in and keeping them. ^^ it sparks interest
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Erthe [2005-11-25 03:29:13 +0000 UTC]
it would be an exciting jazz festival- i would love to go to one someday......
hehe. but you know you're not supposed to puff your cheeks like that when you play- ruins your breath support : P
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Jrevious [2005-11-25 00:00:33 +0000 UTC]
Ray, that's one fucking kick ass drawing. what was the medium? excellent piece man
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Ethereal-Mind In reply to Jrevious [2005-11-25 17:12:47 +0000 UTC]
hahaha thanks Dave! oh yeah btw as im typing this im in fridays class and hey guess what? you just walked in the room! you shoulda skipped, actually im regretting that im here but ehhhh.
....just one more class...just one more class.....
oh yeah this was done with acrylics and guache and watercolours on toned paper and then edited in PS.
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7grims [2005-11-24 22:12:07 +0000 UTC]
wow, wish i could go... great work.
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oreverbo [2005-11-24 20:25:02 +0000 UTC]
Is that the actual list of people playing this year? Herbaliser was in it last year and I missed it, been kicking myself ever since, and I'm kind of hoping he'll play it again.
I like the singer, but it doesnt really look like hes singing jazz, I get more of a swing or ska vibe off him. Maybe its just the shows I go to, but it seems like jazz singers tend to pull in when they're getting into it (as opposed to back and out like your guy). His arms frame the title nicely though.
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fuzzywanderer [2005-11-24 20:23:09 +0000 UTC]
OMG yo man thats awesome
lol the dude in green looks like he is a rapper^^
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ArtDoge [2005-11-24 20:20:43 +0000 UTC]
Lol if you think thats bad, go look at my ad poster for my upcoming school play Bye Bye Birdie, its like 10 x worse than this XD this is amazing btw Ray, looks that guy uptop is gonna freestyle something big XD
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woxzelox [2005-11-24 19:12:24 +0000 UTC]
wow...that looks freakin' awsome...good job!
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UlisesGirl [2005-11-24 18:38:47 +0000 UTC]
I wanna go to the jazz fest... The guy with the mic looks like he's scatting his butt off!
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dustopants [2005-11-24 18:17:27 +0000 UTC]
yes! I love the varying skin tones, and I like how detailed the clothing is...
I would have thought this was a real poster... great job
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curry23 [2005-11-24 17:09:51 +0000 UTC]
supa cool! i luv your stuff!
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ichinon [2005-11-24 17:03:53 +0000 UTC]
What stands out to me most is the patterns on the two players' clothing. The background, though simple, is pretty effective in my opinion. The expressions on their faces is very lifelike. I also like how you included the "Proud Sponsers" section. I love this a lot ;D
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Ryu91 [2005-11-24 16:54:05 +0000 UTC]
O_o is this a rock festival? the singer's expression sure does look like a rocker XDD
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Graffiti2004 [2005-11-24 16:53:40 +0000 UTC]
nice! I really like the clarinet player.
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