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Louie-Jr [2016-08-24 23:21:24 +0000 UTC]

I think this deign is awesome! You did a great job on the  armor, and the colors  are sweet as well!

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awkwardly-screechinq [2016-08-24 23:21:12 +0000 UTC]

Hey, ProjectComment here ^^
Alright so let's get the negatives out of the way here - its honestly kind of hard to tell with the armor, but the head seems small in comparison to the body, and it also looks kind of high on the neck. The blonde hair doesn't really look that well compared to the rest of the colors, it looks almost neon. Her balled up hand looks like its in a weird position, it doesn't actually look like its on her body rather than behind her. The background is a bit lacking and could use a bit more detail as well.  Now the positives - I'm just gonna say straight up that I love the armor, its way better than anything I can do. The colors go really well together, although the spikes (?) on the belt could use some work. The shoulder plates are my favorite part, it really gives it an intimidating feel. The actual detail of the hair looks good, I like the style to it. The hair style also does look really cool, although there could be a bit more of a flow to it. Overall I generally like the style, but proportion could use some work.

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XXTheFreedomFighterX [2016-08-24 19:10:35 +0000 UTC]

Weird haircut, but awesome! Nice work man!

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Medula-Oblongata [2016-08-24 18:42:44 +0000 UTC]

Ah the lady in armor, one of my favorite things.  I'll start out by saying that I love the overall design of the armor.  The colors are striking, it's a practical design, and still manages to look feminine.  I have to applaud the use of a practical design as opposed to the 'female armor' that is typically seen (what with putting emphasis on the breasts and such).  I like the facial expression for sure, it's kind of a, 'what are you even doing' look, so I wonder who or what exactly she is looking at.  There are a couple things I noticed that could use some improvement.  The armor pieces on her right upper arm should be facing outward.  The way she is posed, we should be able to see underneath the arm.  Here is an example of that I am talking about: i.ebayimg.com/images/i/3017113… .  Also, the plating around the waist seems to be a bit too tight.  Looking at breastplates, they go down to around the waist, but do not really get much thinner as they go towards the hips.  Here's an example: knightsofchrist.com/wp-content… .  Though with that being said, I know that many armor drawings are meant to be stylized, so apologies for my nitpick if you were going for a more stylized look. Overall I really like it, keep it up

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OCDGothNerd [2016-08-24 15:30:39 +0000 UTC]

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I really like the "Joan of Arc" look on her face. I find it makes her look strong, however, if you want your character to look just a bit more feminine I would recommend drawing her eyebrows a leaner. Although I understand that the armor will make her look bigger than she actually is, good thinking of showing her neck to make it stand out that she's a woman, I would make the chest plate a tiny bit smaller with either a "breast" plate to show her femininity or just bring it down a notch. At that point it is a choice of esthetic to be honest in my opinion. Her right arm (left on the screen) is great with dynamic and all, but the other one seems a little robotic in my opinion and less impressive. Your simplicity in the armor is very effective, it looks exactly as it's supposed to and again, the only little detail that could be easily fixed, are the lines in her middle section where it could be perfectly aligned, but other than that this is a great piece. I hope this comment helps you and that I was constructive.

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HisPurpleness [2016-08-24 15:27:20 +0000 UTC]

Very good. You've avoided the rather tasteless trend of making 'female armour' little more than a metal bikini.

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JMFAnimations8 [2016-08-24 14:41:56 +0000 UTC]

awesomeness.

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spikethehated1 [2016-08-24 14:35:07 +0000 UTC]

i like it,the haircut is nice,she look serious and ready to fight,great work

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CABARETCABS [2016-08-24 14:18:24 +0000 UTC]

Lovely use of cell shading, the only qualm I have about this piece is the face, I believe the chin needs to be more central to the mouth and the jaw on the right side is slightly to high.

I could redraw/ edit the image and show you what I would change.

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