waterangel17 [2012-09-08 04:35:18 +0000 UTC]
Firstly, I love John's expression. Pretty much perfect in my opinion.
The hand seems out of perspective, I can see what you're trying to do, but I think it's a little too far forward, also the arm appears to be by his side, when it should be out. Another suggestion is to use varying brushes with the grass, for example instead of using /only/ 5 strokes have 2 strokes, one stroke etc.
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Erin-Leigh In reply to waterangel17 [2012-09-08 10:42:11 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much! I do need to work on perspective, and next time I draw grass I'll be sure to try different brushes. :]
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