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Name: Ashe Somber
Age: 17
Race: Human
Occupation: Student at Atlas Academy
Appearance: 5' tall. Average body shape. Shoulder length brown hair and dark brown eyes. Dust mask that doubles as a neck scarf. White and grey hoodie with a red lining. Custom chest and back plate and knee pads made from the standard material used in the armour of Atlas troops. Utility belt holding revolver cylinders all around and a small all purpose pouch. Black fingerless gloves. Black leggings. Holster on her right leg. Black and white sneakers.
Personality: Quiet and respectful to her superiors but loud and humorous with her team. Prefers not to make contact with others outside her tight group of friends but is not afraid to open up if necessary. Acts awkward in the presence of faunus's as she has a hidden obsession with them. Isn't fond of written work or studying but totally in her element on the field.
Strengths: She makes up for her small size with her agility and stealth when necessary, complimented by her semblance.
Weaknesses: At times, lacks moral and relies on team members to push her.
Semblance: Brief invisibility, allowing her to easily evade incoming attacks and striking from behind or to sneak past enemies and pick them off one by one undetected. Becoming invisible causes physical strain on her so she can only hide for 10 seconds at a time.
Background: She and her parents owned and worked at an indoor farming facility. Most of her life has been pretty mundane. Just helping out however she could and hanging out with the few friends she had. Living in the far outskirts of Atlas, it wasn't uncommon to see military ships and patrols pass by. She was always fascinated with the military and even more so with huntsman and huntresses. She wanted to live outside her boring old life and see what lies outside the safety of the walls. she felt like being a huntress was the best way to do that. Admittedly, she also thought she would look pretty damn cool all tooled up ready for battle. She secretly trained on her own, swinging around garden tools, mainly a machete, pretending they were weapons. She also hid many books about combat in her room. It didnt take long for her parents to discover her new passion. Although concerned, her parents fully supported her and once she was old enough, she enrolled in the Atlas Academy to chase her dream. Because of her special abilities, the school has plans to recruit her for covert operations after she graduates
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Comments: 18
SpinalArt [2018-01-15 22:15:36 +0000 UTC]
Good job and could you make a male version of her?
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CalRizz [2017-02-01 13:57:53 +0000 UTC]
Well done, you put the background story on her makes me wonder, does she has a whole story?
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EquestrianMarine In reply to CalRizz [2017-02-04 22:27:13 +0000 UTC]
not yet. I've only gone as far as to think about the interactions of the team (which im working on)
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DESTROYER9-75 [2017-02-01 05:50:36 +0000 UTC]
THAT is what I call a huntress!
AWESOME!!!
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Onisatsu18 [2017-01-30 13:17:45 +0000 UTC]
Love the outfit. Gives me a The Division/Destiny vibe, but cooler.
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ScrapMetal345 [2017-01-19 09:26:14 +0000 UTC]
This is really well done!
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Tripwire612 [2016-11-09 08:46:57 +0000 UTC]
I'd say this oc is almost flawless. I am so happy to finally see a RWBY oc that is extremely well written for once. You followed the naming rule, which is pretty neat. I especially love that your character wears the black well. She doesn't come off as too edgy. I can also definitely see a consistent urban theme going on. The outfit seems like something you would see on a huntress in training in the RWBY universe. The semblance is pretty cool, as it can create massive tactical advantages, yet is not over powered because of the semblance's drawbacks. The personality is pretty refreshing, too. Ashe feels 3D; like an actual person who has her own goals, fears, and motivations. Her strengths and weaknesses are pretty well balanced out. I like that she lacks motivation (that's what I assume you meant by moral) and needs to be pressured as opposed to the typical "I'm too nice/powerful/loving/forgiving for my own good" crap. Her background is realistic, yet interesting. I especially like how you played on the fact that her life was pretty boring by having that be her motivation for doing something more exciting (like being a huntress). No dead parents were harmed in the making of this oc. I am a bit concerned with the lack of training in the background before joining Atlas Academy, but then again, I might just be missing something. Overall, this is one of the best ocs (not just for RWBY) I have ever seen. Fleshed out, has depth, original, clever, and pretty cool.
I'd say 9.8/10. Keep up the good work!
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EquestrianMarine In reply to Tripwire612 [2016-11-09 11:33:18 +0000 UTC]
wow thats actually really nice of you to say that. thank you. i hope you feel the same about the other OCs i have planned
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Warpath07 [2016-10-31 11:47:42 +0000 UTC]
She sounds like an impressive character nicely done.
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AmplicityVibe [2016-03-17 03:07:07 +0000 UTC]
Looove love love! So cute and good hehe! <3
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Rosenkruex [2016-02-26 03:30:55 +0000 UTC]
I'm just glad to see more Atleasian characters.
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IndecisiveFigure [2016-02-19 14:43:55 +0000 UTC]
Looks awesome mate! Her gear matches her personality extremely well. I'm guessing that one of her specialties is urban warfare, or covert ops?
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Skullwife [2016-02-19 08:39:52 +0000 UTC]
This is so good omg
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