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EpicAssassin47 β€” Can't get you off my mind
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Published: 2015-03-15 02:04:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 220; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description Just a little poem for my special someone, who was on my mind the entire time I was on base at Pensacola, Florida for 3 days when I barely got to talk to her. I know she's reading this, and I hope I make her speechless like always! lol


I can't get much sleep on this cold, ragged (1)rack.
It's so dark in here, it's almost pitch black.
I've been thinking about her this whole afternoon,
And I'm writing this song by the light of the moon.

Since I got to the base it's been big guns and boats,
But without her, I sink, like when a boat no longer floats.
I look at the ground or look up at a star,
But my mind stays halted, like an engineless car.

During daytime and night, she's right on my mind.
To make this, I must, I feel so inclined.
I can't stop thinking about her even if I tried,
And because of our distance, my love seems to (2)bide.

I stare at a ship or glance out at a train.
Or I stare out the window of my T-6 airplane.
I could stare at a million things without stir,
But nothing can take my mind off of her.

She is my queen and I am her knight!
For her, there is no battle that I would not fight!
I look up to her and see royalty.
My one... my love... has my pure loyalty.

She may not believe me but I'd die for her.
She's earned endless trust, my feelings won't (3)deter.
I love her as much as a cat loves it's yarn,
And she is my home like a horse has it's barn.

But I really hate the fact that she's treated as a maid.
Working hard for her siblings as they joked and played.
They gotta get set straight, like cards that get decked.
And look up to her and show some respect.

'Cause she is worth more than the world's greatest gem.
And without her, I'm nothing, like a plant with no stem.
She thinks just of others, like HER feelings don't matter.
And to knows she feels that makes my spirit wanna shatter...

My love... *clears throat* is my beginning and end.
I live only for her, I refuse to pretend.
Her feelings DO matter, like to this lucky guy.
To let her think different, I won't let that fly.

Girl, you're my life, and can bring a smile to my face.
You are my lifeline, my one saving Grace.
This poem, this song, is dedicated to just you.
I love you with such passion, please know this is true.

A day without you is a day without light,
Without you, I'm closed, like a bank vault locked tight.
But when I am with you, my heart feels so calm.
And I know I am safe with my soul in your palm.

I wanna spend the rest of my life by your side,
My mind was at war but you turned the tide.
You've forever changed me, I hope this you see.
And I hope you'll say yes when I askMarry Me Emote


(1) - Rack- Military slang for a bed in a barracks.

(2) - Bide- To grow stronger over time of building.

(3) - Deter- discourage (someone) from doing something, typically by instilling doubt or fear of the consequences.
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Comments: 30

Dirtoverflower [2015-05-07 20:14:30 +0000 UTC]

Awww, that's cute and cool!!!

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EpicAssassin47 In reply to Dirtoverflower [2015-05-07 20:15:57 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, thanks! ^///^

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Dirtoverflower In reply to EpicAssassin47 [2015-05-07 20:18:17 +0000 UTC]

Totally it's a very cute and very lovely poem
and I am totally guessing here but she really loved it didn't she?

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EpicAssassin47 In reply to Dirtoverflower [2015-05-07 20:20:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you thank you thank you! >////<
Heh, I think so! Atleast I hope she did! : )

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Dirtoverflower In reply to EpicAssassin47 [2015-05-07 20:23:43 +0000 UTC]

Haha, you are most welcome
From the way that poem is I know so

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EpicAssassin47 In reply to Dirtoverflower [2015-05-07 20:24:20 +0000 UTC]

Hmmmmm... (is suspicious of something)

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Dirtoverflower In reply to EpicAssassin47 [2015-05-07 20:27:04 +0000 UTC]

What?

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EpicAssassin47 In reply to Dirtoverflower [2015-05-07 20:28:01 +0000 UTC]

Nothin. Nothin at all. = 3 =
Just a little off my rocker, I guess...

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Dirtoverflower In reply to EpicAssassin47 [2015-05-07 20:29:48 +0000 UTC]

Oh okay

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EpicAssassin47 In reply to Dirtoverflower [2015-05-07 20:31:33 +0000 UTC]

Wanna chat? Β chat.deviantart.com/chat/TeamK…

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amyaims [2015-03-15 18:51:54 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful. She's going to love it! I guarantee.

Another beautiful poem. You are truly an amazing writer.

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EpicAssassin47 In reply to amyaims [2015-03-15 18:55:08 +0000 UTC]

She did!!

Awww Β 

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amyaims In reply to EpicAssassin47 [2015-03-15 19:24:39 +0000 UTC]

Yay!!!

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RadiantBLU [2015-03-15 02:07:31 +0000 UTC]

Aww. I'm sure whoever you wrote this for will like this :3

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EpicAssassin47 In reply to RadiantBLU [2015-03-15 02:14:01 +0000 UTC]

I really hope she does!

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RadiantBLU In reply to EpicAssassin47 [2015-03-15 02:16:14 +0000 UTC]

Who'd you write it for? :3

Oh nvm I know xD

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EpicAssassin47 In reply to RadiantBLU [2015-03-15 02:18:25 +0000 UTC]

My girlfriend >//u//<Β 
Didn't you talk to her?

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RadiantBLU In reply to EpicAssassin47 [2015-03-15 02:21:46 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I just read the beginning of it lol
Yeah, we talked. She's really cool E=

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EpicAssassin47 In reply to RadiantBLU [2015-03-15 02:23:11 +0000 UTC]

Awsum gurl
I KNOW RIGHT *clears throat* excuse me... heh... >//u//<
I'msolucky

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RadiantBLU In reply to EpicAssassin47 [2015-03-15 02:29:24 +0000 UTC]

Yes you are

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EpicAssassin47 In reply to RadiantBLU [2015-03-15 02:30:03 +0000 UTC]

lol

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RadiantBLU In reply to EpicAssassin47 [2015-03-15 02:32:44 +0000 UTC]

YO YO YO

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EpicAssassin47 In reply to RadiantBLU [2015-03-15 02:34:48 +0000 UTC]

WUT WUT WUT

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RadiantBLU In reply to EpicAssassin47 [2015-03-15 02:37:40 +0000 UTC]

YO YO IT'S BUBBSY

WIV MAH CREW, BLOSSASSBITCH AND BITCHERCUP

WE DA PRETTIEST CHEAP ASS HOES AT DA PARRRRTAY

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EpicAssassin47 In reply to RadiantBLU [2015-03-15 02:40:11 +0000 UTC]

YO YO

WOOT WOOT BITCHERCUP IN DA HOUSE

YAS WE ARE WE BE SEXY AND AFFORABLEΒ 

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RadiantBLU In reply to EpicAssassin47 [2015-03-15 02:45:14 +0000 UTC]

POWERPUFF GANGSTAS

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EpicAssassin47 In reply to RadiantBLU [2015-03-15 02:45:45 +0000 UTC]

MY LITTLE MOBSTERS

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RadiantBLU In reply to EpicAssassin47 [2015-03-15 02:46:12 +0000 UTC]

FUK YEA

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EpicAssassin47 In reply to RadiantBLU [2015-03-15 02:50:55 +0000 UTC]

BITCH ASS HOES FO SALE

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RadiantBLU In reply to EpicAssassin47 [2015-03-15 02:57:20 +0000 UTC]

HOLLA

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