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Soulslayer317 [2021-11-05 10:05:47 +0000 UTC]

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JoshuaKrause [2016-05-26 07:59:23 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact

Vision: you took something that exists then made a variation.
Originality: same as above
you have all the hard edges but lost all the soft ones more balance the shades are good could go deeper looks unfinished but you may be happy where it is nailed the face creepiness and the rocky background dull reflective surfaces and forgot lighting and cast shadowing so I call it a WIP and would be worth polishing.
Impact: out of all the deviants on the menu when I went to new works. your stood out. good lines a bit rough but you have to polish this stone and work on what I mentioned above. cast shadows the sabers look really dim and like they are just going to burn not slice. metal is highly reflective dust is coarse. textures mostly. stance is posed Static rather than dynamic. once you got all that more polish the background were talking weeks of polish unless your fast. but yea good drawing skill image translates I know what it is. 3.5

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Exam-Kun [2017-04-07 21:17:21 +0000 UTC]

Those wings ruin that chest piece.

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wayleri [2016-10-18 18:25:09 +0000 UTC]

Это из КОТОРС? Что-то я такого там не помню. Наверное, давно проходила((
Классно детали проработаны. И мне нравится его классический ситхский взгляд.   

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Inkary [2016-06-20 12:40:40 +0000 UTC]

Nice nice nice! Love your sith artworks.

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wolverine959 [2016-05-27 06:07:16 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!

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Essjayc [2016-05-26 22:38:39 +0000 UTC]

Wow. This is actually really deserving of a really in depth critique. I'm going to be doing some studying later, so I will break this piece down and dissect it and try and give you a really technical critique. If you want that sort of thing.

Just posting this both because I absolutely love it, and it caught my eye almost immediately (not easy to do that in art), but also because I don't want to forget to actually write a proper critique, if you are interested.

I may not be a really skilled artist myself yet, but I find critiquing the theoretical and technical stuff has helped me learn a lot.

Let me know what kind of information you're looking for in the critique as well, and I'll be happy to take some time and do one for you!

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Euskelo [2016-05-26 21:17:06 +0000 UTC]

Marvellous fanart! He certainly looks like a serious and experienced warrior.

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tazdarkstripe13 [2016-05-26 17:39:00 +0000 UTC]

Can I just say that I love not only the symmetry and the respirator, the slightly damage and the tattered robes are smegging amazing

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Kuroi-Koumori [2016-05-26 12:20:30 +0000 UTC]

I really like those lightsabers! Looks almost like antimatter or something! Really cool piece!

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JoshuaKrause [2016-05-26 08:01:14 +0000 UTC]

did you like doing this piece?

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