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Look who's on a role with pages!
Ok, Stef didn't actually give a fatal hit to Lox, but the laser gun I am sure has a gauge, which I hope means for how strong the laser is. Mainly a warning shot, because I'm sure Stef is nobel enough not to just kill his opponent right on the spot, but have a fair fight. Even if his opponent is acting like an idiot.
But I hope Stef doesn't seem like a bad guy here, because he truely isn't! He just wouldn't like Lox at all, really. Lox is technically the bad guy anyway. So seriously, he's not angry at him for no reason or anything, that's just silly.
(I hope the text is easier to read! And my sister coloured in the Irkens in the background for me, and the advertisements, how nice
)Page 1 (if you missed it): [link]
Irkens © Jhonen Vasquez
Stef by
Lox by
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Yeah XD Hate looking back at my old pages..
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Ah, I like this guy already. Firing a warning shot. Two, technically. AND he's smart, considering Lox seems to be the kind of person to use one's own weapons against one's self. On to the next page to see what tricks your magician has planned!
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Haha, I like your insight on my comic, it's a lot different to others
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wow! ur really good at making comics! is this ur first one? aww! lox looks cute with that suprised expression in the circle panel! (it kinda looks like am expression my sister would draw but eh. 
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Yes it is 
AAhh, I think I might know what you're talking about xD If not, I can always ask my friend, she's a Pokemon AND a a fan of Gary Oak! xD Heck, I only know what he looks like because I draw him for her! I hear is a mo' fo'
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yea, i like the dramaticness u put in ur comic. haha, lox doesnt wanna die. 
oh? a fellow gark oak fan? i have to meet her, can u link me to her? haha Hey, Gary's awesome! XD yea, he is a mo' fo', but thats why i like him, i love the characters that are bitches.
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Haha, good point! XD
Hehe, she's XD She's also a fan of other things, but right now her biggest thing is Pokemon C:
Lol can't blame you, I also like the real annoying characters too xD
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YOU ARE SO GONNA KILL ME. XD Really. You are. My pages won't even compare to yours. YOU CRAZY AWESOME PERSON YOU.
D:
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NO WHAT? XD I HAVEN'T GOD DAMNED SEEN YOUR COMIC YET! I've been working hours because I haven't a clue how yours will turn out. You know I'm scared so much about this competition. I mean.. scripting.. thats the hardest part, I can hardly compare to people at all, who I think they can come with it on their own in hardly the efforts 
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LOL
Well my process is slow, but I can't even get decent art out for my comic
I'm riding on the script being decent enough to get me past this rut XD
LOOK AT ALL THAT SUPPORT YOU GOT D: You luckyyyy.
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I think this is my favorite page so far! I was able to read it before, but it's easier now. The expression on Lox's face on the first panel is hilarious. I think it's his eyes. I also like how you went out of your way to do a side "gag" with Zort. It makes it more interesting. And shows why Lox is acting weird. That last panel though...that's my favorite. The expression alone makes it awesome. I love your use of perspective too. ^^
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*watching your every move
I'm hell with typos today :C
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Aah, you could have said so that it was trouble reading! 
I tried to go for what those manga comics do when they have little chibi things representing their facial expression in dramatisation, but did it more my way since I'm not too big on anime anyway 
Aahh! You remembered him? Zort is following him around.. you know, bail 
Aww, the last panel I thought I was a bit unsure of if it looked believable or not, but I think I'm getting the hang of action scenes. Just gotta practice, practice, practice!
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It wasn't that bad really. Believe me, I've read handwritten comics where you have to squint to read them.
Haha, I'm not an anime fan myself. But I do like some of the expressions.
Yeah, that's what I like about it. I can't wait to see the next page.
It definitely looked believable to me. And you are getting better. Most of my pictures are after the action has taken place. Practice is good though.
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Sweeeeeet
Who's that other guy sitting in the audience? (the one in the blue bubble?)
And I love Lox's face near the top there
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*sorry there are a crap load of typos there I hit enter before I could check my message D:
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Ahh, that would be Zort, and Irken Elite
In my entry comic, Zort ratted him Lox out for stealing beta Elite weaponry. Lox is actually on bail, until he either winds BS or dies. Zort is following him around to make sure he doesn't run off and be free
If you're interested, the pages where he appeared in also are here [link] But you don't need to read it if you don't want to xDD
You mean the one where he's 
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both are good. But the one where he's like
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It looks awesome!(Yay! You mentioned me!
In the second last panel, I like how you made it look like Stef was yelling!
You drew everything so well!
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Yes I sure did. Yes, I'm glad you noticed the pattern, I thought it looked good with it. Robots? I thought they were space ships in the distance but they could be robots, yeah.
I thought it looked a bit funny, but I'm glad you liked it!
Thanks
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Yay!
It makes it look like he's yelling.
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Aahh, interesting idea
Oh yes.. well, he definitely is! Or exclaiming, haha
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Yeah. Looked good.
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Oh yes.. Laser gun
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Yes
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YEAH! pretty pink lazers are always the deadliest
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Oh yes
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Aww darn, then that would have been cool XD
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Interesting. Does Stef have those piercings on each eye? Because you drew them on his left eye first and then in panel it is on his right eye.
I must say that the coloring a shading is fantastic, but I think Stef is a bit greener than the last page, but don't go by me, I need glasses.
I bet 500 monies that Lox wins in the end!
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Tattoos, yes, on both sides head above his eyes
Oh damn D: I think it was this page, or the page after where I was too lazy to pick the exact colours for the background and everything, so ti could have included the skin colour too, but I know that I didn't choose the same shade of black on his coat P:
Haha! 8D I'll let ya in on something, in some of the later pages, you'll see some people betting on the characters XD
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w00t! In that case, I bet 10,000 monies for Lox 
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Nu! D: Direct hit!
I forgot to mention on the last page how well you managed to make a place where they're fighting that actually looks like it has proportions. As far as I've seen, that's the biggest problem of most of the BS comics I read.
Btw your sister's pretty good!
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Oh yesserie, direct hit!
Wow, really? I never thought I was too handy with backgrounds myself, I'm afraid. I tried hard to make it believable, like there is a real scenery they are in, and not just something placed in the background. I'm happy to see my efforts where put to well effect, and I thank you for telling me that
Aha! xD Yes, I suppose she is, she even shaded them in! She's only 11, but she did better than what I would be - I'd be so impatient! I let her feature her little Irken OC in the crowd in the stands there, so it wasn't an unfair agreement
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Really!
Her OC huh?
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CORN? XD Oh dear.. if he came out to battle with that.. gee, he must be GOOD
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lol!! yep X) battle with corn!!
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Oh yes (: I sure hope so! I'd fail as a comic writer if I got boring right in the beginning pages xD
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haha you can't fail if you just started
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Wow this looks fantastic. I have nothing to critique at all about this picture I find it really well done! Wow this is great! I love how you inserted that chubby Elite soldier in there from the dream!
I love the little touches like the banner ads.
Man excellent entry!
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Seriously? Ahh gee, well you certainly don't have to critique it, because I don't find this much of an artwork at all, even if it technically is!
Yes, well actually, I thought it would be cool if he followed him out while he's on bail, just to make sure Lox didn't just run off and be free
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Ohmai c:
The shading is epic, and so are the backgrounds! The "pew!" Thing made me lol XD
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Haha, yes, well how else am I going to set the sound effects for the laser? XD May as well. Thanks C:
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Lawl, idk, make an animation? (NOT REALLY THOUGH, THAT CRAPLOADS OF WORK D8)
Lulz np :3
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Hell. No.
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