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emeraldeyesx3 — Sail Away

Published: 2013-02-20 15:47:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 1116; Favourites: 54; Downloads: 11
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origamicranegirl [2013-03-21 16:12:30 +0000 UTC]

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I find this photo interesting, possibly just because of my music background, but still, interesting. I like how the lyrics match the small origami sailboat, and how you focus on the words. However, I believe it could be improved by focusing on the boat, too. It follows the rule of thirds, placing the boat on the intersection, but I feel like it could be made better with some cropping. I like how the boat does not follow the lines of the music, adding an interesting skewed element. I however, do not not know what the small, shiny objects are in the background, and do not know what they are for. Overall, I find this to be a very nice picture.

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Foxy-Knight [2015-03-13 17:06:14 +0000 UTC]

Sailing on the musical sea, that's where I would like to be.

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SimplyMint [2013-04-03 19:14:17 +0000 UTC]

Featured here!
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emeraldeyesx3 In reply to SimplyMint [2013-04-03 19:50:55 +0000 UTC]

Aww - Thanks

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SimplyMint In reply to emeraldeyesx3 [2013-04-04 19:12:03 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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SuperSnappz [2013-02-20 23:55:06 +0000 UTC]

Cool concept and composure

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emeraldeyesx3 In reply to SuperSnappz [2013-02-21 10:49:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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