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Published: 2009-04-04 04:57:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 13687; Favourites: 160; Downloads: 222
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Your comic illustrations are amazing. Can we show off your prowess to our kababayans back in our turf? They would surely be proud to see your world caliber drawings. Partners?
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Thnks Lan..last year pa yan..nadaaanan ng mga mag d DD,,he he-
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I enjoy your frame division especially in the bottom where his axe is also depicted on the left frame with the elephants - nice work fellow Daily Deviation Artist of April 23rd 2009!
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thank you lucas-glad to be in DD,congrtas too!cheers...
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Clean but not unflavored siply. Wow! and more WOW!! Direct to my Favs.
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Gracias Nohemi
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Thanks if you like my 'inking'..actually they are only pencils,maybe i just adjusted in in photoshop too much
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I love the simplicity and the complexity of this page. Its simple story of someone who picks up a weapon and battles with it but the details are nice, not over loading the eye but giving enough to enjoy it.
Nice work!
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First, I'll state my appreciation of this piece – Sometimes I can be a little blunt and I bypass my positive reactions to give my critiques.
I love the layout, it does it's job; sending the eye through the picture. I noticed that the dominant element is the mace (and it's motion.) You've used it well in the composition.
Now on to what I see wrong:
• Your shadows are a little generic.
• The panel borders are so thick that they take away from the art.
• The damage on the victims is disproportional to the weapon being used. Especially the man near the bottom, center of the third panel. That man's face should have been half taken off.
• The main character's 'armor' – I assume that's what it is – is under detailed in the second panel. It looks like he's wearing a cloth shirt which magically transforms into armor in the last panel.
• Personally, from my own style, I would have made the first panel an action shot of the main character kneeling towards the mace.
- Aaron
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Hi Aaron-thank u for dropping by and thanks too for
your comments,i am grateful you notice those things,
from there i learn..
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Hello Carlyne,thanks for the 'wow'
dropping by,,
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wow your shading is really neat!! great drawing skills too
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hello brightfuture,thanks for your comment,i really appreciate it.chhers
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Beautiful work 
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How i wish too..he he he...thank u for dropping by
khado
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You welcome
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Hello ClubBBW-Thank you for that nice compliment,they pick me for DD,It's accidental only,though i really appreciate it and i am flattered--thank u so much once again,btw you are cute and pretty-cheers
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It's great to see comic art make DD! It's well deserved to! Great drawing!
Congratulations on the Daily Deviation!
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Hello MythArcana..i am speechless he he..Thank you very much for the compliment,thank you for your time as well..
I fully appreciate everyhting.Your artwork are very nice TOO,they are 'striking and powerful'i love your color
and composition..it's nice to hang around with guys like you here in DA.Cheers!
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This certainly has all the makings of an epic graphic novel! You have the magnificent detail and line art going on and strong characters, and a sweet layout! It's hard to get much better than this! Excellent piece and congratulations on the DD!
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