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elimistfire — The day a dragon returned part 1 the finding
Published: 2016-10-23 22:04:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 194; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description The day a dragon returned part 1 the finding


     My life is like a dream as far as I can tell it is closer to being a nightmare with lots of sleepless nights of surviving and evading dangerous situations that involved the government. Wait a minute I'm getting ahead of myself hi my name is Elimist age 17 and my story starts on a clear summer day at the beach on the cost of Lake Erie with water as far as the eye can see. I was just your average guy with goggles and flippers getting ready for the cold water and the situation of where you take baby steps towards being a ice cube with your mother on shore urging you to get in. Well that's my predicament today as I slowly get in the water little do I know what lie beneath the waves. Positioning my goggles on my eyes I prepare to dive into the depths towards my destiny.

     Have you ever wondered what was beneath the waves because I now know humans have a long way to go before they reach this far since parts of the ocean are untouched by us. I am swimming underneath the water marveling at the forest of seaweed and creatures of the water when I see a clam unfortunately I had to go back to the surface for air. Gathering a breath I start to head back down it took a few seconds to find the clam since it was swimming away from me, giving chase I eventually catch it and again head to the surface. It was cool the clam was a slight light blue in color with a ripple like texture like ocean waves on its shell not to mention it was the biggest clam I've ever seen. Have you ever tried to get one open Picture someone trying to get open a vice without unscrewing it that is me man I must look silly or stupid one or the two. All of a sudden it opens up causing me to loose my hold on it making it and what it dropped fall into the water I dive quickly to recover the clam but seeing the ball made me switch my attention away from it.

     The ball quickly sinking I race to catch it going deep underneath the surface on the lake bed I pick it up. in my hand it was half the size of my fist and was the same light blue as the clam I got it from I realized that it was a pearl and that was the last thing I saw as I blacked out then and there underwater.
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HornDragon6 [2016-10-24 18:16:36 +0000 UTC]

Very nice.

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sooo222 [2016-10-23 22:06:48 +0000 UTC]

This is so suspencful. you must do more! Honestly. BTW may second part of TAT will come out later tonight, so could you read it when it comes up? please and thanks

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elimistfire In reply to sooo222 [2016-10-23 22:24:25 +0000 UTC]

Shure and was there anything you liked

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sooo222 In reply to elimistfire [2016-10-23 22:39:07 +0000 UTC]

Your depth of tone and the way you described the setting was so suspenseful, it makes people want more

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elimistfire In reply to sooo222 [2016-10-23 22:40:37 +0000 UTC]

Ok I'll have to continue that in part 2

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sooo222 In reply to elimistfire [2016-10-23 22:41:28 +0000 UTC]

you do that ill talk again when my new story part is up

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elimistfire In reply to sooo222 [2016-10-23 22:41:47 +0000 UTC]

Ok

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