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Description This is a painting I did for my art class :3
Oil on wooden panel (new medium for me )
Comments appreciated
Note: I have a horrible camera...It doesn't do the painting justice *sigh*
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eden-paradox In reply to ??? [2010-02-28 05:39:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much , The critique is very helpful ...I agree with everything, but I think a lot of the shading/lighting problems have to do with my bad camera quality , I also agree with the "no discernible light source," I tend to like to make up shadows and lights as I see fit ( Which is a problem..I guess, lol) And yea, the ear is...a bit awkward...I also made up the anatomy for the ear because I wasn't sure (because elves aren't real..unfortunately and references are hard to come by..I guess I should look at tutorials for elven figures ) The hair also bothers me...It's because I'm not used to the oil medium and didn't realize that I'd have to wait until it completely dried to do lighter colors (they just ended up blending with the dark brown colors )
Thanks again for the thorough critique

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MaryCapaldi In reply to eden-paradox [2010-02-28 05:48:06 +0000 UTC]

Ah yes, cameras can be such a pain when photographing paintings! The ear isn't terrible, but perhaps if you had it at more of an angle or a little wider like a human ear except pointed? A little experimenting is great for figuring out what looks best, and I'm sure you'll hit it in no time. I've never used oils myself, but they sound difficult! Good luck!

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eden-paradox In reply to MaryCapaldi [2010-02-28 05:52:05 +0000 UTC]

It's definitely not my favorite medium , unfortunately that's my art professor's favorite medium , I prefer watercolor if I'm going to paint traditionally
And I will definitely continue to practice, thanks!

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yaminoyume [2010-10-15 06:12:22 +0000 UTC]

Wow! This is so pretty. O:

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eden-paradox In reply to yaminoyume [2010-10-15 17:05:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Persephones-Child [2010-10-02 04:25:57 +0000 UTC]

OMZ! She is so very lovely! As soon as I saw her, I thought of my character Ainnipe. Elven barbarian chick in my book, way cool.

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eden-paradox In reply to Persephones-Child [2010-10-02 19:09:59 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much , Your character sounds bad-ass

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Persephones-Child In reply to eden-paradox [2010-10-03 00:29:51 +0000 UTC]

Well, I didn't originally give her ram's horns. . .may I borrow I write those down? And yes SHE ROCKS

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eden-paradox In reply to Persephones-Child [2010-10-03 02:31:27 +0000 UTC]

Of course you can

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Persephones-Child In reply to eden-paradox [2010-10-03 04:55:22 +0000 UTC]

Terrific! Thank you so much!

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Torreschette [2010-06-21 02:34:50 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow, that's some crazy skills you have with oil. How long did it take you to paint?

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eden-paradox In reply to Torreschette [2010-06-21 02:45:11 +0000 UTC]

I did it over two days, probably over ten hours of work

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Valley-of-Fury [2010-06-20 01:59:00 +0000 UTC]

featured!! [link]

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sahyeh [2010-03-19 19:06:56 +0000 UTC]

It's very beautiful!

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eden-paradox In reply to sahyeh [2010-03-20 04:18:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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RoseCarballeira [2010-03-19 17:32:05 +0000 UTC]

This is such a gorgeous painting! The composition is rockin' and your handling of oil (to me the most difficult of all mediums) is mad skilled!

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eden-paradox In reply to RoseCarballeira [2010-03-20 04:13:35 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thank you so much , Yea, oil is really difficult...I just started working with (only because college level art classes love oil...:/) It's still not my favorite medium...but I'm still giving it a chance

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Acisej [2010-03-03 16:07:32 +0000 UTC]

Wow, great job!

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eden-paradox In reply to Acisej [2010-03-03 16:10:31 +0000 UTC]

Thanks , oil is a difficult medium...

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Acisej In reply to eden-paradox [2010-03-03 16:13:03 +0000 UTC]

I've never tried it but I've heard it's a pain. XD
It looks really nice though, so I'd say it was worth your effort? C: <3

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eden-paradox In reply to Acisej [2010-03-03 16:15:45 +0000 UTC]

It was , I had no choice either way though, because it was a homework assignment XD...

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Acisej In reply to eden-paradox [2010-03-03 16:21:20 +0000 UTC]

Ahyes... XD;

OTL

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UnicornReality [2010-02-28 21:23:10 +0000 UTC]

This has a feature in Stock and Awe 59 .



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eden-paradox In reply to UnicornReality [2010-02-28 23:32:43 +0000 UTC]

Oh my gosh! Thank you so much!! , this means a lot to me

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blackinuyaju [2010-02-27 11:47:48 +0000 UTC]

wow! gorgeous painting!! I really like how the colors fit together and blend so well.

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eden-paradox In reply to blackinuyaju [2010-02-27 16:42:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks you so much , I'm an addicted blender

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phoenixfyre6967 [2010-02-26 23:42:17 +0000 UTC]

This is really pretty, I just wish it was a bit better quality (camera), maybe you could try putting it into photoshop or asking someone to and using the noise reducer tool?

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eden-paradox In reply to phoenixfyre6967 [2010-02-26 23:43:31 +0000 UTC]

hmmm, well I could try that...I know my camera sucks...I'm sorry

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phoenixfyre6967 In reply to eden-paradox [2010-02-26 23:48:40 +0000 UTC]

nah, i understand, but sometimes the photoshop thing works

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XxXTickleMehEmoXxX [2010-02-26 01:24:06 +0000 UTC]

Really epic.
The only thing I can see which seems to be a bit off is the horns. The shading/shadowing on it looks off to me.

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eden-paradox In reply to XxXTickleMehEmoXxX [2010-02-26 01:33:56 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, yea I agree...They turned out better as I messed with shadows a bit more...I think I drew them a bit too small...I'd never tried horns from that angle..so I kind've.....guessed lol

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XxXTickleMehEmoXxX In reply to eden-paradox [2010-02-26 01:36:10 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. I really need to work on my realism/shading, thinking of that.
D<
Stop reminding me of things I have to do.

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eden-paradox In reply to XxXTickleMehEmoXxX [2010-02-26 01:39:14 +0000 UTC]

Bahahaha, sorry ...well I have to work on hands..*sigh*..Nightmare!

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XxXTickleMehEmoXxX In reply to eden-paradox [2010-02-26 01:41:48 +0000 UTC]

Oh god! Hands!
And my homework comes first.
I'm in all honors.
And I have clarinet to do!
Thank god I dumped my boyfriend.
That was just too much effort, especially since he couldn't help me with my homework.
Ouch, that sounded harsh.
We're still friends, and it was mutual, so....

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eden-paradox In reply to XxXTickleMehEmoXxX [2010-02-26 01:44:13 +0000 UTC]

Hahahahaha The boyfriend part made me laugh so hard lol
Yea,....unfortunately college has to come first for me...

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XxXTickleMehEmoXxX In reply to eden-paradox [2010-02-26 01:48:52 +0000 UTC]

GOD!
Life is getting in the way of school again.

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eden-paradox In reply to XxXTickleMehEmoXxX [2010-02-26 01:49:33 +0000 UTC]

....I prefer to say school is getting in the way of life

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XxXTickleMehEmoXxX In reply to eden-paradox [2010-02-26 01:59:19 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, but me passing school affects my life.
I don't have a job, and if I get a B, my parents flip.
I have more than one b.

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eden-paradox In reply to XxXTickleMehEmoXxX [2010-02-26 02:00:34 +0000 UTC]

Wow...That seems a bit harsh, my parents were always happy as long as I got all As and Bs, and I was in honor classes.

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XxXTickleMehEmoXxX In reply to eden-paradox [2010-02-26 02:04:32 +0000 UTC]

My mother also considers anything below a 85 a B.
I meaning, to her, I have like five C's.
I understand why she's so touchy.
I need to get a scholarship, and I'm ADHD, quite heavily, we are trying to sell the house, and dad is already living in the new place waiting for us.
My sister also came out to her last year, and she isn't getting that good of grades in college.
So mum's stressed.
Which means I get it in the neck.

Hmm...
I smell like guy.

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eden-paradox In reply to XxXTickleMehEmoXxX [2010-02-26 02:06:58 +0000 UTC]

Aw, I'm so sorry they're so strict on you..they really shouldn't be that harsh, you'll be fine in life, trust me
lol, you smell like a guy?

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XxXTickleMehEmoXxX In reply to eden-paradox [2010-02-26 02:08:48 +0000 UTC]

Oh.
My friend in college gave me a lift home today.
She brought her boyfriend, and he was attacking one of my other friends, my first friends little sister, so I ended up mock wrestling with him.
Then I stole his hat.
And now I smell like his cologne.
It was funny cause the way I got him to stop attacking my friend was by grabbing his nipple.
Gotta love my school.

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eden-paradox In reply to XxXTickleMehEmoXxX [2010-02-26 02:10:51 +0000 UTC]

Hahahaha, that's funny, I love it when my clothes smell like a guy's cologne

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XxXTickleMehEmoXxX In reply to eden-paradox [2010-02-26 02:13:33 +0000 UTC]

Yeah.
It's nice cologne too.
And I got asked if my and my friend were making out in the back seat.
We were making fun of them kissing by making kissy noises at each other.

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eden-paradox In reply to XxXTickleMehEmoXxX [2010-02-26 02:15:18 +0000 UTC]

lol, bleh...I hate it when people make out around me, my mom makes kissy noises when my boyfriend kisses on the cheek lol

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XxXTickleMehEmoXxX In reply to eden-paradox [2010-02-26 02:21:22 +0000 UTC]

Yeah.
That's the way me and my friend's say hello and good bye.

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Kinsara [2010-02-24 22:39:26 +0000 UTC]

Wow, very good! I like it a lot. The drawing is amazing.

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eden-paradox In reply to Kinsara [2010-02-25 01:36:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much ^^, you guys make me feel all warm and toasty about my art

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TopBananas [2010-02-24 22:15:47 +0000 UTC]

It's beautiful!

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eden-paradox In reply to TopBananas [2010-02-25 01:37:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much

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