BlazingCoral [2013-11-02 16:27:07 +0000 UTC]
Ooooh! I think the concept art vibe was successful, since that was what came to mind when I saw the thumbnail. Really like the use of brush-strokes here--gives it a very painterly feel. Colors look good, too.
Just two things I would point out--GLaDOS's face seems a bit... round. Part of it's the edges, and part of it's the way you have her face shaded--it looks kindof egg-shaped. The other thing is that the blue on Wheatley doesn't really show up elsewhere in the pic. ...Well actually looking at it again, I see some of the blue from his optic on the wall behind him, though I wonder if you couldn't put some of that color elsewhere to help balance it out a little more.
Oh, also, I like the positioning of Wheatley's rail. Leads the eye in pretty well. \o/ Very nice work overall!
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eagling In reply to BlazingCoral [2013-11-15 09:11:07 +0000 UTC]
As late as this reply is, thank you very much for the advice! I really appreciate it, it was very helpful.
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