rubyrouge649 [2018-12-18 00:03:17 +0000 UTC]
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It is nice to see a ‘Nightmare Before Christmas’ depiction in your style! I think you captured the designs of Jack and Zero here. I like how Jack has collected Christmas items like the present he is holding; it matches his growing curiosity and obsession. To have Jack positioned on top of the Town Hall is an interesting choice because I think this solidifies his distraction away from the growing urgency of Halloween celebrations as his duty as the 'Pumpkin King'. I like the ‘jack-in-a-box’ ’s goofy expression, mixing Halloween make-up with Christmas festivity with its little hat.I do think there could be some extra details that could be added to backgrounds such as this one. For instance, for the night sky, it would be fitting to have celestial objects like stars. Either that, or making the night sky a gradient rather than a single colour. Overall, nicely done as always~
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Duckyworth In reply to rubyrouge649 [2018-12-19 08:33:00 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much for the feedback. I do enjoy reading critiques. Seen as Nightmare Before Christmas is one of my favourite films, I feel it was time I tried drawing fanart for it. I was trying to emulate the night sky seen in the film from Halloween Town here, but I can see why it may look a bit barren here (and I do often go for minimalist at times) -and I appreciate the honest feedback.
rubyrouge649 In reply to Duckyworth [2018-12-19 12:22:00 +0000 UTC]
Now I see what you were trying to do with the night sky. And I'm glad that you appreciate the feedback I could offer.
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vindurza [2018-12-15 17:45:52 +0000 UTC]
Disney does some amazing stuff with this film during christmas www.youtube.com/watch?v=423eKm…
YourClairyGodmother [2018-12-15 16:39:30 +0000 UTC]
My favorite movie ever~!