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Published: 2010-09-25 04:59:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 3379; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 85
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my first flash website ever. so take it easy
i hope everyone likes it. i might stil tweek a little on it here and there so comment's are appreciated and fav's too!
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Beautiful work! It is very nice.
There are many spelling/grammar mistakes is my only problem - fix those and you're golden!
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was just to practice flash on it
to lazy to fix it, cause I'll make something better in the future anyway.
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Well its very professional-looking ... awesome work, keep it up!
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like it, the fade out effect should be faster IMO because if you click links fast it lags behind. FYI, when you want to talk about creating an entirety of something, it's spelled "whole" . A "Hole" is what's in the center of a donut
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Hey, since I can't write a critique I'll try to do so in a comment. I hope you'll appreciate that.
One thing that bothers me here is filesize - 1.6 MB . There's nothing here that could make it that high, except tons of rasterized graphics.
Take a look at :thumb169795562: - it's only 300 KB - almost everything is made out of vectors.
Flames are nice, yet when you see flash, you basically expect some movement - they could simply be glowing or something.
Fonts - I know you wanted them to look fancy and cool - that's fine - really, but no matter what you have to make them easly readable. Try putting a 1px shadow behind them at 125 degrees (45 degrees in Flash) - you'll notice huge difference.
Navigation - try navigate really fast - before your text-replace animation finishes - you'll notice that it's a little buggy. When I didn't know ActionScript that much as I do now, I used to make animations fast enough to minimize that effect, so most people wouldn't notice that. Try it
Pre-loader - why completely zero text and white background? Try adding some info to let someone know that he's on the right page - and after loader reaches 100% it launches an animation to fade from white to your website - it's really easy - and most people would consider this as an intro.
I am aware that it may look like me being a jerk and picking on everything to just jerk around - but I am convienced that it'll give you a lot more than hearing "Yeah, it's great" etc.
Anyway, keep it up, as your work is good, and can be better if you train your skills
Greets.
Moffy
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thanks for taking time to comment me in this length
as i earlier stated it's just the first, never coded any website before.
and didn't know how to make movement inside the website. just banners.
all in all i had alot of trouble but atleast i know now how to make pages
next time expect something cool!
and about the text color's, can't dissagree about that
anyways, thanks alot!
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by that thumb (which I don't know why doesn't appear) I meant this deviation of mine: [link]
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damn, that looks sick. problem is. i don't know enough about flash to make something like that :/
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Looks very nice!
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yeah i thought about it, but i have to learn how to do it first.
i know how to make banners and now practicing hole websites.
still need to figure out how to do ''intro-like'' things.
you know...
btw about the color, an great painter said i should try mixing turqoise with orange
so i did
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You managed to mix turquoise and orange pretty well, though if you make a website, the text should always be easy to read. If not, people will leave and you don't want that with a pretty design like this.
As for the intro, you could insert several frames in front of the home page and put an animation there. Name the keyframes and code carefully, so you get there only once. You could also try a different scene, but I'm not sure how and if that would work.
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yeah i should make the text a little brighter.
about the intro, ahh
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Lots of tutorials and stuff on the net. You just have to take a look around 
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to be honest i dont like it that mutch.
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Shoo, it looks awesome! Just a few thingies and it will look even more awesome
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nagyon jΓ³ 
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kossz, amugy igazad van kicsit lasan valtogat. de ez csak az elso
jovobe csinalok jobbat!
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