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dreameren93 ā You tell me
Published: 2013-10-13 23:39:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 111; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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You tell methat you like my winter mornings
Swearing
that they always are so clear
Iām dancing
like i wanna grow old tonight
While my shadows
they are shaking
in the light
from your dark eyes
And i fall
and fall
and you tell me
that you like my winter mornings
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This is beautiful. I continue to love how you can capture a moment so beautifully without many words. Your poems and writing dives so much deeper and clears away from cliche words. I particularly love the line "I'm dancing like I wanna grow old tonight."
That line just says so much and is so much stronger then saying, "I'm falling in love with you." or "I'm really happy."
It's amazing!! I love this.
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woah i'm so glad you like it! I usually write in danish, while i'm not that good at english, so i really appreciate it. Thank you!
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You're welcome. It's beautiful!
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