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Published: 2011-01-22 07:37:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 535; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 8
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Description Commission for of her REALLY interesting character, Io.



I'm not quite satisfied with the background. I attempted to convey Io's ability to control waves, buuuut that didn't turn out too well. I probably should have gone with something more organized looking. ;3;

ANYWAY. Done with acrylics, some goache, microns, and iridescent paint. :3

Character (c) to :iconpythosblaze

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Comments: 7

JANunnoArt [2011-01-22 21:53:16 +0000 UTC]

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That really is such a unique character design! What I like that you did to the character is that the way its body is drawn it feels like it is being pushed up in the air especially because of the face and the way the eyes, the mouth and the ears are being pulled back against the current/ wind. It's shading is really good, it makes it feel more metallic than like fur which is an interesting contrast to the idea that the creature is light enough to float! The one thing I would do to make this piece come together a little more, is try to bring possibly some of the wisps over the creature just so that it feels like it is more "in" the piece than "on" the piece. I know you did each part separately and then pasted the creature on the background, which works on well for keeping detail... but pushing it into the background a little more will definitely bring the whole piece together.

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DreamBurst In reply to JANunnoArt [2011-01-23 05:33:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much! I see what you mean, I never really thought about pushing him more into the background.

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JANunnoArt In reply to DreamBurst [2011-01-24 01:50:14 +0000 UTC]

Sometimes it takes an outsider to point things out... I get told things about my pieces I never would have thought about fixing, or altering or adding if it hadn't been pointed out to me. But, that's why we have critiques I'm glad I could help and you're welcome!

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WolvenMoonMist [2011-01-30 00:52:25 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful! I love the feeling it gives me when I look at it. How much would something like this cost?

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DreamBurst In reply to WolvenMoonMist [2011-01-30 19:16:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I tried my best to keep in tune with the characters abilities. Io, in particular has the ability to control any form of wave: sound, light, radiation, radio, water, etc.

This piece in particular is a colored, inked sketch. Commission info is here: [link]

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Draikairion [2011-01-22 16:30:51 +0000 UTC]

Floating Io is floating! Lovely and I like the smoothness of the wisps.

The only thing I would do is to try and cut Io out completely. I know it can be a bugger sometimes, especially with all of them fine details but it will be worth it!

`D

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DreamBurst In reply to Draikairion [2011-01-22 18:56:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

It would, but I was worried about obliterating the detail by fully cutting him out. You could think of the white like a force field XDDD

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