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Halstrom [2018-07-16 22:37:18 +0000 UTC]
Nice, but yeah still too dark, maybe needs the neon glow from a sign this si side of her
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Aping-Pixels [2018-07-16 20:34:27 +0000 UTC]
I like the image a lot!
My suggestions for what they are worth:
It looks a little too dark? A small bounce light to imitate the light bouncing off interior from the neon lights in the background?
Bonus round challenge would be to add wet patches under the window openings.
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draperx In reply to Aping-Pixels [2018-07-17 11:56:53 +0000 UTC]
Rerendering as we speak, It is a tad to dark, Tho even tho I did put puddles on the new one they don't seem to be showing up yet (It's only 6% at the mo tho) Hopefully I'll get the Bonus round \o/
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Aping-Pixels In reply to draperx [2018-07-17 18:32:29 +0000 UTC]
I saw the update - looks awesome!
New to DeviantArt (though yes I have had an account for 7 years) only recently become active here. Should have asked if you actually wanted my input.
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draperx In reply to Aping-Pixels [2018-07-17 18:53:15 +0000 UTC]
Imput is always welcome, Can't improve without it
Heh and yeah I had an account for years before I actually started posting stuff
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