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lyecat [2022-11-08 22:10:20 +0000 UTC]
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M-ariazell [2016-05-02 03:42:17 +0000 UTC]
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Ok, here goes! My first critique!
Firstly, for vision, I rated five stars. I think that you knew what idea you were going for, and that you carried it out really well. Your execution was really great. I feel like your piece was well put-together, and that it had a good cohesiveness to it (things didn't feel all over the place). The three blasters being around Sans lends a symmetrical feeling to the piece, and a sort of balance, not drawing your eye too much in one particular direction (if that makes any sense, haha).
As for originality...I rated four stars simply because I've seen a good number of pieces around dA depicting this scene from the genocide run, some even showing the corridor in a similar way (although they may have been drawn in different lighting/perspective/etc). I don't feel, however, that this takes away from this deviation, as this was executed well, and is generally a very well-done piece!
For technique, I've given you five stars. The blurring in the image effectively draws the viewer's eye to Sans, and then up to the blaster mirroring Sans' expression, and then to Chara and the knife. It successfully sets aside Sans as the main focus of the drawing. I love the way the perspective is done as well, and the way the end of the corridor is shown off in the distance behind Sans. It helps to paint a very dramatic moment where Sans is the last hope of stopping Chara. Additionally, the movement of Sans' clothing also helps to illustrate the drama/action of the moment. The blurring also helps to show action of the characters, rather than having them seeming to stand still, which is something I really enjoy about this piece. The lighting of the piece is one of my favorite things about it. I think you've built upon the lighting in the game itself very well, in a way that allows for dramatic highlights and shadows.
As to the impact of the piece, this is the type of drawing that I wish I could do. It's the kind that sticks in my head, so that when I think of this moment in the game, I can picture something like this. The lighting, the action, and the movement that have been captured in the piece are excellent. I can almost picture Sans saying his well-known lines (which the piece is named for) before the event depicted in this art takes place.
Overall, very very well-done. I absolutely love this work; it's one of my favorite Undertale fanarts on dA, I think. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>
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chocowaufflepaws [2016-03-06 20:36:31 +0000 UTC]
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Alright, let me make this with a list.
I love the effects you put on this! It's just... AAAAAAH! Amazing! How Chara is slightly blurred and... Well, I would continue but I need to name my other things.
The PERSPECTIVE! It's absolutely amazing, I won't ever be able to do that even if hell freezes over (heh) but you just NAILED it.
The background. Now, This is lineless, so this... I just.. I just can't ever imagine I would be able to do this. I... I just can't imagine... And it's tilted! AMAZING!
The shading-- Like-- I just-- I can't... It's SO AMAZING OH MY GOD On a LINELESS piece!
Sans.
Sans looks just like in the game. You made him look amazing, and really giving a bad time. And his eye reflects on the blaster, too... I just...
I could never, ever, ever be able to get as good as this. I'm out of words, out of oxygen, and crying. This is officially the BEST. Yes, the BEST EVER UNDERTALE PIECE I HAVE EVER SEEN. Is this a print? Because I would buy this, no matter what the hell my parents say, because I... I just feel so inspired, but I can't cry right now. I... GAAHHH AMAZING HOW?!
Keep up the amazing work while I find some strong enough words to describe this piece.
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UnityFlare In reply to HazeSpawn [2016-03-09 00:50:23 +0000 UTC]
I voted fair super awesome
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UnityFlare In reply to HazeSpawn [2016-03-09 00:50:01 +0000 UTC]
I agree it would be super cool if sans reflection would show on the knife for the simbolism of his fate
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Dbapkero In reply to HazeSpawn [2016-03-06 05:16:41 +0000 UTC]
Nuu! I rated it unfair on accident ;3;
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deedust [2019-05-06 01:56:47 +0000 UTC]
Um, hey, love the work but unfortunately I found it doing a reverse image search from someone on Etsy selling prints of it. Which doesn't look like something you authorized given the license you gave it and they cut off your signature from it as well. www.etsy.com/listing/703040083β¦
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Dragoreon In reply to deedust [2019-05-12 09:22:47 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for telling me! You are totally right, I didn't authorize the sale of any product using this image.
I'll send an email to make sure it's taken down. Thank you so much again.
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deedust In reply to Dragoreon [2019-05-12 12:57:27 +0000 UTC]
No problem, that company got a few other artists and I'm just happy I was able to let you know about it. Your work is awesome!
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edi19982 [2018-03-29 18:01:01 +0000 UTC]
That's awesome! I love the scenery and Sans expression. One thing though I feel that could be different is the sharpness of the overall image. It looks kinda blurred. Overall I think it's amazing!
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Dragoreon In reply to edi19982 [2018-03-29 21:27:40 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! This was a photoshop practice, so I had to modify the blur a lot of times and I just left it like that because I couldn't get it to look better.
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SansFangirl4life [2018-02-23 17:06:37 +0000 UTC]
this is facking awesome!Β
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pyrotank [2017-12-20 02:04:36 +0000 UTC]
Hi !
I used your picture in my video !
You got credits at the beginning of it and in the description !
Leaving you an early link ( The video will not be up until 12/20/17 2h30pm French time )
www.youtube.com/watch?v=bvMYxgβ¦
Thanks for your art !
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Dragoreon In reply to pyrotank [2017-12-22 12:43:08 +0000 UTC]
Sorry but I can't see it :0
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Tamami-tyan [2017-07-12 20:18:04 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow, this is wonderful!Β Β Β Β
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PeeperGames [2017-07-10 01:06:41 +0000 UTC]
Β great job
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JulianOrts [2017-06-30 08:35:44 +0000 UTC]
The angle
The Sans
The Everything
Just oh my god you captured this so well, and Sans face actually looks serious with his smile unlike most people can make.
*does the Italian kiss to hand thingy* Beautiful and absolutely astounding.
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NicoGrad [2017-04-20 02:14:00 +0000 UTC]
IT'S AMAZING!! Β
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