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Darkmaster58 [2009-02-06 13:32:10 +0000 UTC]
you have to color this
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bjeanm [2006-03-12 04:09:32 +0000 UTC]
Lol. I just noticed the ass sticking out. Nice touch. I think I'm going to draw lingerie. soo... bored.. OOO Megatron in Lingerie
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DragonGurl05 In reply to bjeanm [2006-03-12 05:21:15 +0000 UTC]
Megatron in lingerie.... o_O
DO EET.
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bjeanm In reply to DragonGurl05 [2006-03-12 16:32:33 +0000 UTC]
lol I'll try. Should be fun.
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scooterraccoon [2006-02-04 08:44:58 +0000 UTC]
ie got to admit, it is hard to find errors. i think thats because of your drawing style, more than anything.
ive got a couple, though. nothing major....
i cant quite decide if the head is maybe a little small. in comparing it to the hands, though, id say it wasnt. it may just be a feature of the hair...
the feet are the most detailed part of this piece by FAR, i wish i could draw them like that. but... i actually stood up, and tried to stand like that. it was uncomfortable. i dont know, perhaps twisting the right foot further forward would help you?
couldnt find any problems with the twist in the torso, except perhaps that you might expect a lot more folding in the clothes as a result of it.
ive noticed a tendency of yours (here and in a couple of other pieces), to draw hands very loosely gripping objects. its not really a problem, i just wondered whether that was the effect you intended to get?
i'd have made the sleeve of the leading arm wide all the way to the shoulder, although that would mean obscuring her breast O NOES...
i figure that the lack of comprehensive shading is because you colour in PS. which makes sense.
face is proportioned well, better than i can do it, i think.
what were you drawing with?
heh... i think thats it for criticism....
you have a talent for detailing that i would miss (the folds in the trousers, for example), and an interesting style. keep going, when you can.
ABSOLUTELY NO COMMENT ON THE UNDERWEAR....
-John
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