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Description In this portrait Fallon defeats Flemeth. This was a huge departure from what I usually do. The first time I included something not human. And it was also the first time that I didn't have any kind of reference. I got the idea from when my character battle Flemeth but unfortunately I play on the Xbox so there could be no screenshot... so this whole thing came from my mind (which explains the why the Dragon looks a little odd and the proportions aren't exactly right.)

Anyway, I like it. And I promise this will be the last Fallon picture (....probably)
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Comments: 34

Elitha [2011-08-18 00:26:09 +0000 UTC]

Oh, wow, that is such a huge dragon! What I like most about this picture is the look on the girl's face -- she looks so fierce and determined, yet also scared.

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Dragonavicious In reply to Elitha [2011-08-18 17:52:03 +0000 UTC]

I'd be scared too lol , but I'm glad that you like her face. I was trying to get across the emotion.

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gwpe [2011-07-05 09:12:48 +0000 UTC]

Awesome work, especially on Flemeth! And great angle, too!

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Dalish-Elf [2011-05-05 00:11:55 +0000 UTC]

Great detail!

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Dragonavicious In reply to Dalish-Elf [2011-05-06 23:11:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much.

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Dalish-Elf In reply to Dragonavicious [2011-05-06 23:12:14 +0000 UTC]

No problem

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Halendia [2011-04-22 13:22:45 +0000 UTC]

I like it. It's beautifully coloured BUT the expression on your warden/hawke looks very "meh", it doesn't look like she's just rammed a big damn sword into a badass dragon. You should work on that. Otherwise, beautiful.

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Dragonavicious In reply to Halendia [2011-04-22 17:05:26 +0000 UTC]

Haha, I know. I might change it, specifically her mouth I think. I probably will touch it up when I have more time. Thanks

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Celaren [2011-04-22 07:11:48 +0000 UTC]

D: D:
10000000000000000000- Rivalry

Don't. Kill. Flemeth QQ SHE KICKS ASS . QQ

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Dragonavicious In reply to Celaren [2011-04-22 17:06:41 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, it had to be done.

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Celaren In reply to Dragonavicious [2011-04-22 20:36:44 +0000 UTC]

It's still really good though ;3
but sadness ;[[

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Dragonavicious In reply to Celaren [2011-04-23 02:56:14 +0000 UTC]

I know, Flemeth is pretty much the shiznit.

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Celaren In reply to Dragonavicious [2011-04-23 07:46:55 +0000 UTC]

agreeddd :3

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SeventhRain [2011-04-22 02:13:59 +0000 UTC]

Oh my God girl! This is epic!

You have really improved....I think it's awesome that you've done something besides a portrait and drew something that wasn't human. It doesn't look like your first attempt at all. Fallon looks absoutely beautiful, and I like your dragon. It looks more like Flemeth's dragon form looked in DA2, which I thought was better than Origins'.

But the last Fallon picture? Aww, why? Moving on to your Hawke?

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Dragonavicious In reply to SeventhRain [2011-04-22 03:22:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much, I thought it was pretty epic too. . I really liked the dragon as well. I think since I was playing DA2 while I drew this then thats probably why it looks more like that version (which I liked better too).

As for being the last Fallon picture, I guess we will see. I just don't want to overload poor deviantart with her. And I've yet to make a Hawke worth drawing

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SeventhRain In reply to Dragonavicious [2011-04-22 03:43:56 +0000 UTC]

I'm proud of you! It's really different from your other stuff. Was it a challenge?

There's way more deviants who spam their page with their Wardens than you.

I think I've created a rather interesting Hawke, but I don't want to write her, just have someone draw her and write down facts about her like I did with Z and Jaiden.

But I'm sure you'll make a Hawke you're connected to soon.

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Dragonavicious In reply to SeventhRain [2011-04-22 03:46:23 +0000 UTC]

It was a total challenge. If I knew how to work Photoshop I'm sure I could have improved it but I think its a step forward.

You should tell me about your Hawke, maybe I could draw them for you when my list of pics clears up.

Hopefully I'll make a good Hawke soon. I played through first as a warrior and made one for all the other classes but we will see.

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SeventhRain In reply to Dragonavicious [2011-04-22 19:53:59 +0000 UTC]

It's definitely a step forward from the portraits you've done. I'd like to see more of that from you. I like this Fallon better, too. She looks more elven due to her sharper facial features and I LOVE her hair here. It's all flowy.

Oh okay. Her name's Joey Hawke. Yeah, just felt like giving her a boy name. I know in canon Daddy Hawke's name is Malcolm, but in my canon he's Joseph. And Leandra insisted their first child be named after him no matter what. So that's why her name is Joey.

Her father was Rivaini, so she and her siblings inherited his dark skin, albeit they're lighter because of Leandra. She has wide amber eyes, a long wide nose, full lips, and black hair. She has the same hairstyle Mama Hawke has with default Hawke, that ponytail with the bangs. And she got facial tattoos to rebel against her parents when she was 16. I know she has the same features as Adaia and Jaiden, but I just think that's a beautiful combination.

She's an apostate, naturally. A tomboy, so she's one of those rare mages that wear pants. (Either the smuggler robes or the Robes of the Notorious Pirate, and to a lesser degree, the Champion armor) She would be the witty/sarcastic Hawke, though she would be diplomatic in serious situations. Doesn't like Carver at all, though she would still defend him because that's her little brother and she loves him. Her best male friend is Varric and her best female friend is Isabela. She defended her against the Qunari even after she betrayed her. She romances Fenris, and even though she always sides with the mages they somehow have a friendship-romance.

...That was a mouthful. And you playe as a warrior on your first playthrough? Wow. I always play as a mage first. They're even more badass in the second game. I never play as a warrior, even though they're more interesting in combat now. Hmm. Who did you side with at the end?

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Dragonavicious In reply to SeventhRain [2011-04-23 03:09:45 +0000 UTC]

Your character sounds interesting. I can't wait to read some of your stuff about her. (And who knows maybe that dad's middle name was Malcolm and he went by that or something... I don't know, but I think Joseph works)

Magic in this game is so awesome, but I always play as a warrior first. I really like to rush into things and beat people up. But since my warrior didn't work out I am really looking forward to my mage.

And obviously I sided with the mages. I think they set it up for you to do that (since you grew up in a magical family) more then siding with the Templars.

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SeventhRain In reply to Dragonavicious [2011-04-23 07:55:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I try to make them unique, whether it's backstory, appearance, or name. With Joey I think it's the name.

I don't know if I'll write something about her. I can't think of anything. Maybe I will in time. I'm still hung up on my Wardens, though. I'm gonna whip up a story with a mage who is punished for helping Jowan (Duncan isn't there to save her) so she goes through the Rite of Tranquility, but the ritual is stopped halfway as the Circle is attacked by Uldred, so the templars leave her to her death. Haven't gotten all the kinks worked out, but she'll find her way to Alistair and the rest of the group. Her emotions and magic are gone temporarily, but with time they come back. She learns how to love through Alistair. Okay, that part may be lame, but I like it.

But, back to Hawke. Yeah that could work. About Malcolm.

Oh yeah, mages ftw. I love beating the crap out of people with my staff and shooting lightning everywhere. Rogues are even more awesome too. I've always found warriors boring, don't know why. Just doesn't appeal to me. I do like playing as Fenris and Aveline from time to time, though.

Well some people were saying on the forums that the mages and Kirkwall were out of control and stuff, and blood magic had just gone crazy. Considering what Orsino did (which I thought was just completely stupid) I can agree with them to some degree. But no one should be isolated and punished just because of something they inherited. So of course I sided with the mages. I would even if I wasn't a mage, or if Bethany wasn't a mage.

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Dragonavicious In reply to SeventhRain [2011-04-25 18:55:25 +0000 UTC]

No I think that sounds pretty good, should be an original concept for a story.

I always side with the mages too. Just because I think they are unnecessarily harsh. I think what Orsino did made no sense. First off he was an awesome badass hot mage (I would have married him in a second, inspite of the receding hairline)so why he suddenly felt hopeless even though you were winning is beyond me.

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SeventhRain In reply to Dragonavicious [2011-04-25 23:14:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. Gotta get at least 20 more chapters of Coexist out before I think of starting on Unraveled. Which will be the name of the Tranquil story.

Yeah I guess him going batshit crazy was supposed to stress to us how a mage will freak out when they feel they're backed into a corner. But he shouldn't have felt cornered because the Champion was there....eh.

But lol you think he's attractive? I think all the DA2 elves are ugly as hell. The only beautiful one is Fenris in my opinion. Though he, Athenril, Merrill, and Varania aren't bad looking.

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Dragonavicious In reply to SeventhRain [2011-04-26 04:22:49 +0000 UTC]

Exactly, he wasn't backed into a corner at all... it was odd I think.

But he is so attractive. Okay, maybe not physically. But his voice and his badass attitude. I feel for him when he went out to distract the Qunari. So awesome.

Varania is Fenris' sister right? Cause I though his sister was okay too. I actually thought that was what Fallon might look like with the new elf look, but it might just be the red hair and green eyes that made me think that.

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SeventhRain In reply to Dragonavicious [2011-04-27 22:30:28 +0000 UTC]

I know. 'Twas an epic fail on his part. Hawke had killed all the templars that'd attacked then, everything was fine...

Yeah he is pretty awesome. I like his eyes. But then again, all elves in DA2 have gorgeous eyes. Still though. And it was really cool when he risked his life to distract the Qunari while Hawke and the gang snuck in.

Yeah that's her. But really, anyone who's related to Fenny can't be ugly.

Hmm, I don't know, I've never thought of it. Personally I never want to see Z or Jaiden in the new style. I like the way wanderer drew Fallon, too. You could tell the difference between her and a human with the same features.

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Dragonavicious In reply to SeventhRain [2011-04-28 03:45:33 +0000 UTC]

I hate the new style so I saw her and was thinking... "Meh, maybe she'd look like that..." personally I like the way she looks now. (Although from all my drawings, Fallon's face is never concrete).

I loved the way Wanderer drew her. I think I might have raved like a crazy person about it cause I was so excited.

But I don't think you'd have to worry (although I get why you are hesitant) both Jaiden and Z would be attractive elves in the new format, (Still hate it though).

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SeventhRain In reply to Dragonavicious [2011-04-28 03:50:15 +0000 UTC]

But I do think she'd look like Varania, though. I mean if you think about it, all the DA2 elves look alike, save for Merril and Fenris. So I'm thinking she'd look like her.

I do too! The thinner features, the bright eyes....and not weird-looking. How an elf should be.

Lol I can relate I fangirled when I saw your picture of Z for the first time. I still smile about it.

I wouldn't bet on it. Lol. But I'm sure they'd be attractive by standards. Or maybe they'd look different like Fenris and Merril. Either way I don't wanna take the chance.

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Dragonavicious In reply to SeventhRain [2011-04-28 04:13:08 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. I was sad when my warden wouldn't be in the new Dragon Age but when I saw what they did to elves I was cool with it. All elves in Kirkwall are freakish... and also elves that visit Kirkwall, like Zev, so maybe there is a magical barrier around it that transforms elves...... well thats the story in my head.

Aww, awesomesauce. I'm glad you had a fangirl moment. Its exciting when people make your character for you, that's why I'm willing to do it for others. (If I like their character that is )

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SeventhRain In reply to Dragonavicious [2011-04-28 04:17:55 +0000 UTC]

That's one way to put it. I'll tell myself that too. If you're an elf and you enter the Free Marches, you change.

But yeah, I personally think Zev is the ugliest elf in DA2. But really, all the Origins got hit with the ugly hammer when they made they're cameos. Even Alistair.

I agree! I did though, it's really a beautiful picture. I just love your coloring and art style. And if I could draw, I'd do Fallon for you.

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Dragonavicious In reply to SeventhRain [2011-04-28 04:38:40 +0000 UTC]

Ok, new idea, everyone changes when they enter the Free Marches. Except Hawke, any anyone related to her... and Aveline. There. We solved that.

Aww thank you so much. Thats sweet. But your writing is good enough for me. Just get the next chapter out and I'll be happy.

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SeventhRain In reply to Dragonavicious [2011-04-28 04:44:18 +0000 UTC]

Lol, exactly. I'd say the only one who changed for the better is Izzy. She's just beautiful now.

You're welcome! And aww, thank you!

I'm gonna get chap 25 churned out as soon as I can. Right now I'm working on the Goodbye oneshot. There's more than one goodbye (I think there's....4, I think) and the main character will surprise you.

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Dragonavicious In reply to SeventhRain [2011-04-28 04:46:51 +0000 UTC]

Oh right. Gosh I keep forgetting. And thats coming up soon so you best hurry. I can't wait to read it!!!

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SeventhRain In reply to Dragonavicious [2011-04-28 04:56:38 +0000 UTC]

It will definitely be finished before Saturday is over! Are ya'll going to separate the judgments by writing and visual art?

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Dragonavicious In reply to SeventhRain [2011-04-28 05:00:26 +0000 UTC]

Yep Writing and visual art are seperate with each catergory getting their own prize. Not sure if we are splitting up the pictures or if we will do one for each winner (although I bet the latter..)

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SeventhRain In reply to Dragonavicious [2011-04-28 05:30:45 +0000 UTC]

Oh cool, I think that's more fair. That's what I'm going to do with our first contest, whenever we get 100 members.

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