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warnett [2016-05-05 23:48:10 +0000 UTC]
Not bad, not bad. Β
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RasenganLucario [2016-05-04 01:15:12 +0000 UTC]
This is why people of Remnant never sail the seas, preferring to use airships.Β
Wooden ships, or ships period, attract the aquatic Grimm.Β
That's one of the reasons the Shinobi nations have never found Remnant. Their ships would be destroyed by, and I quote, "black and white sea monsters from hell."
Or at least that will be in my Naruto/RWBY fic. Thanks for bring this idea to my attention.
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Dracoknight545 In reply to RasenganLucario [2016-05-04 01:31:49 +0000 UTC]
True that could be a reason but there are Nevermores and Griffens to deal with in the air but I guess they're more manageable in the air as Aquatic Grimm have the surprise element.
Yep and You're Welcome
By the way check out Ch 3 of my RwbyxPokemon story
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RasenganLucario In reply to Dracoknight545 [2016-05-04 02:20:22 +0000 UTC]
I will when I get a chance.
Oh, I got it.
Naruto and the four Jinchuriki are sailing on a wooden sailboat to the land of Remnant, when they a stretch of ocean where the water's actually black. Han, who can use Kokuo's Water chakra to scan water (kinda like sonar) and says the water feels... evil.Β
And that night, their boat hits something but they can't see it. So Naruto throws up a fireball flare, and......
... they come face to face with a sea of aquatic Grimm. A storm breaks with thunder and lightning, and the visibility was already crappy because nights at sea are pitch black, not helped by the fact that Grimm are naturally black. Fortunately the constant lightning strikes allow for some better visibilitiy and for Yugito Nii to spam a bit of her lightning jutsu.
They're attacked by several of my fan-made ones including:
a Grimm White (Great White Sharks with jaws that could swallow a man whole)
two schools of StipedJaws (Tiger Shark Grimm that are very ravenous and hunt in schools)
a baby Krakor (kraken based Grimm, but it's only about the size of a small rowboat. They can grow to the size of aircraft carriers and cruise ships)
and finally this...
The lightning flash illuminated what could only be described as the undisputed king of this aquatic hell. They could only see up to what they presumed its waist, but everything above the crashing waves stood at least twenty-five feet tall. It's blood red eyes were easily fifty feet across, and there were ten of them, five clustered on each side of its face. It's head was triangular and built like a crocodile, and easily three times as wide and five times as long the boat. Plates of white bone armor had formed over its head, forming a sort of crown. Its chest was easily larger than the Hokage Monument, and its two arms were easily larger and longer than any tree you could compare it to, ending in five long, scythe-like claws. Multiple tentacles spread out from its back, which Naruto saw was a segmented, lobster-like shell, each with suction cups the size of manhole covers.Β
All of a sudden, its claws and tentacles began to glow the same shade of red as its eyes. It opened its mouth, revealing a mouth full of shark teeth the size of trees, and let loose a roar that chilled the blood of the five Jinchuriki.
Naruto: What-
Han: -the-
Fuu: -fuck-
Yugito: -is-
Roshi: -that?-
I'm still working on a name. I'm thinking:
a) the Leviathan (classic sea monster name)
b) the Hydrotitan (mix of the words Hydro and Titan)
or c) "WHO THE FUCK CARES WHAT IT IS?! KILL IT!"
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Dracoknight545 In reply to RasenganLucario [2016-05-04 05:27:51 +0000 UTC]
Cool
I like Option b; Option C can be used as joke by Fuu or Naruto
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RasenganLucario In reply to Dracoknight545 [2016-05-05 00:59:01 +0000 UTC]
Hydrotitan it is.
I bet the people from Attack on Titan will look at this monster and go "Whoa. Why didn't WE think of that?"
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RasenganLucario In reply to Dracoknight545 [2016-07-06 02:14:19 +0000 UTC]
Hey, remember when I said later in my story I was going to give Kabuto some elements from DC's Scarecrow?
Well, this is more along the lines of what I meant.
www.youtube.com/watch?v=oVpe04β¦
Plus it also gives me some ideas for nightmare sequences for Naruto and co.
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RasenganLucario In reply to Dracoknight545 [2016-07-06 02:19:58 +0000 UTC]
Yep. I can imagine that scene with the body bags, but with Minato and Kushina instead of the Waynes.Β
Naruto: Dad?
Minato: You should have been a great ninja. You should have been a hero.
Naruto: M-mom?
Kushina: Naruto... I'm so sorry you had to be born a demon.
(Third Bag)
Nevermore: GRAGH!!!
(Naruto follows Nevermore to the nightmare world)
Naruto: What the hell?
Nevermore: (appears giant) WELCOME TO MY WORLD UZUMAKI! NOW! WHERE ARE YOU HIDING?!
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RasenganLucario In reply to Dracoknight545 [2016-07-07 01:27:39 +0000 UTC]
Thank you.
Also, I just thought of something.
In the anime and manga, the way to get the Rinnegan is for a member of the Senju clan to get Sharingarn transplanted into them (like Nagato) or for a Uchiha to get Senju cells implanted in them (which I'm guess would be like a blood transfusion? I don't know it's horribly explained.)
Now, the problems with this...
1. How the fucking hell would that work?
The Sage's sons lived roughly a millennium before canon. In those 1000 YEARS there's all sorts of bloodlines and divergences in the gene pool. That's one of the reason the Uzumaki, while being an offshoot of the Senju clan, HAVE NEVER HAD THE SENJU CLAN'S WOOD STYLE!
2. If that was the case, wouldn't Danzo or anyone be able to get the Rinnegan?
Danzo implanted multiple Sharingarn into his arm and his right eye. All he would have to do is get some Senju DNA (say: Tsunade) and inject himself with her DNA. Then all those Sharingarn would becoem Rinnegan (which is Grade-A Nightmare fuel.) If this is the case, all someone would have to do is implant themselves with Rinnegan and give themselves a Senju blood transfusion and BOOM! The next Sage of Six Paths is born.
And this is the big one...
3. The Rinnegan is supposed to be the final form of the Sharingarn.
BUT...
The Sharingarn allows the Uchiha to COPY Jutsu provided theyΒ
a) can see the hand seals
b) the jutsu is not part of a kekkai gekkai (such as Haku's Ice Style)
c) use the Amaterasu, Tskyumoi, and the Susanoo provided they have the Mangeyko Sharingarn. At the eventual cost of going blind if it's used constantly.
The Rinnegan allows for :
a) connected vision between clones or Paths
b) the ability to use EVERY form of elemental manipulation (And I do mean EVERY form)
c) the Six Path Powers and
d) a power that's specific to the user.
Seeing as how neither one have the same powers, they're not the same thing or from the same bloodline.
Now, with all that in mind (coughs to clear throat)
THE WAY TO GET THE RINNEGAN IS BULLSHIT, AS WELL AS IT'S CONNECTION TO THE SHARINGARN!!!!
Bye God Kishimoto-
www.youtube.com/watch?v=tXm6F-β¦
If you can't even be bothered to get the facts about YOUR OWN STORY STRAIGHT, HOW IS YOUR AUDIENCE SUPPOSED TO!!
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RasenganLucario In reply to Dracoknight545 [2016-07-07 01:42:08 +0000 UTC]
This is just another example of Kishimoto jacking off to Sasuke and wishing he was the main character instead of Naruto.
And people wonder why some fanfiction writers say that they could write Naruto better than Kishimoto.Β
Speaking of the Rinnegan, what do you think Naruto would look like if he had the Rinnegan? AKA, do you think you could draw Naruto with the Rinnegan?
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Dracoknight545 In reply to RasenganLucario [2016-07-07 01:54:33 +0000 UTC]
I see
Doing the Naruto drawing with him having the Rinnegan, is possibleΒ
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RasenganLucario In reply to Dracoknight545 [2016-07-07 02:01:08 +0000 UTC]
How about giving him red highlights too? I mean the Uzumaki clan is know for red hair.
Actually come to think of it, why didn't Naruto have red hair in canon?
Think about it, Naruto and Minato both have blond hair. And Naruto looks so much like Minato already that the blond hair is pretty much solidifying that he's his son. Why nobody on the Civilian Council or the Civilians figured that out is beyond me (They're probably so stupid they couldn't figure out that Clark Kent was Superman.) And by the point that it's revealed Minato is Naruto's dad, the audience has pretty much figured that out.Β
But if Naruto had red hair, or some red hair in his blond hair, the idea that the civilians couldn't figure that he was Minato's son holds a bit more weight. Plus, this would mean he'd have more Uzumaki blood and he could use some of their signature techniques.
Then again Kishimoto kept him as an idiot through the whole series so he probably wouldn't do that?
WHY DOES NARUTO HAVE TO BE AN IDIOT?!
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Dracoknight545 In reply to RasenganLucario [2016-07-07 02:12:07 +0000 UTC]
Yeah he would be more interesting if he did have those highlights and it would him more interest in who are Naruto's parents
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RasenganLucario In reply to Dracoknight545 [2016-07-07 15:34:21 +0000 UTC]
Yeah.
And like I said, the civilians not figuring out Minato's his dad would be slightly more justified.
But again, I gotta ask, why did Naruto have to be an idiot? We get so many male leads in anime that are knuckleheaded of stupid that it's no longer original and more the subject of mockery. Natsu Dragneel, Ichigo Kurosaki, Monkey D. Luffy, Ash Ketchum in Kanto, Johto, part of Hoenn, and all of Unova (seriously writers WTF). I'm not asking him to be Albert Einstein, I'm just asking that Naruto has a bit more intelligence than what we got.Β
Also, have you noticed the lack of leading male characters in anime with red hair?
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Dracoknight545 In reply to RasenganLucario [2016-07-07 16:34:38 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, they are usually in the secondary or supporting roles
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RasenganLucario In reply to Dracoknight545 [2016-07-08 00:15:20 +0000 UTC]
Exactly.
Well, maybe I should just do my version of a Naruto remake. One where the villains actually have plans that make sense and that doesn't follow the Kishimoto path of stupidity.Β
And seeing as how I gave Naruto the Rinnegan in B.E.A.C.O.N., I'm not sure I should give it to him here. I don't know, what do you think?
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Dracoknight545 In reply to RasenganLucario [2016-07-08 00:25:36 +0000 UTC]
Okay sounds like a cool idea
As for Naruto getting the Rinnegan in your version of Naruto, not sureΒ
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RasenganLucario In reply to Dracoknight545 [2016-07-08 01:08:37 +0000 UTC]
Thanks.
I think I'll wait to figure out what to do after I get done with B.E.A.C.O.N.
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Dracoknight545 In reply to RasenganLucario [2016-07-08 01:13:26 +0000 UTC]
Ah I see, maybe a spin-of with the new generation from B.E.A.C.O.N?
Evil always comes back no matter many times you defeat it
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RasenganLucario In reply to Dracoknight545 [2016-07-08 02:05:18 +0000 UTC]
Different faces. Different people. Different motivations. Evil keeps coming no matter how many times you kill it. The best you can do is train the next generation to fight it, and have faith they'll defeat it.
And no, I mean I'll work on a Naruto REmake after I finish my B.E.A.C.O.N. story. No crossover, just pure Naruto the way I would write it.
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Dracoknight545 In reply to RasenganLucario [2016-07-09 01:50:31 +0000 UTC]
You're Welcome
By the way, have you read the recently chapter of the RWBY/Pokemon story I'm working on yet?
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burningdiotoir [2016-05-03 22:37:24 +0000 UTC]
Will you do more, it'd be interesting to see other legendariesΒ done in the style of Grimms.
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Dracoknight545 In reply to burningdiotoir [2016-05-04 00:02:57 +0000 UTC]
Well I already have Lugia and Mewtwo done and up in my gallery
Still yes I will
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burningdiotoir In reply to Dracoknight545 [2016-05-04 11:47:55 +0000 UTC]
I just found those pics, they are awesome.
Nice, any idea on which PokΓ©mon will be getting the Grimm treatment next?
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Dracoknight545 In reply to burningdiotoir [2016-05-04 13:51:14 +0000 UTC]
I do have a Mega Grimm Mewtwo X sketched and scanned
As for who's next, maybe one of the pixie legendaries and I have been asked to make a Grimm version of either Bunnelby or Bunneary for a Monty Python joke-Β www.youtube.com/watch?v=cCI18qβ¦
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burningdiotoir In reply to Dracoknight545 [2016-05-04 21:41:34 +0000 UTC]
Nice, that sounds like it looks awesome.
The Killer Bunny! That would brilliant to see.
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Dracoknight545 In reply to burningdiotoir [2016-05-04 21:57:39 +0000 UTC]
I have the sketch scanned to my laptop, so I might work on it this week
Yep I know
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tirusr [2016-05-03 20:14:54 +0000 UTC]
This is great. I really like the redesign.
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