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Kinda another you caption.Possibly Allys Bardic, possibly someone else.
Edit: I have also Captioned this Whateley Style and the caption is readable in my fan-art section. [link]
Here is my Caption
Character: Noel Selene Williams (The Selenite?)
"But DaaaAAd Why do I have to go to this Whateley Academy?" Neal passionately argued, "So I turned into a girl, my friends here are ok with that!"
"It's more then you turning into a girl," Neal's Father told the young Selenite, "It's the fact that in addition to an Exemplar 1, you are an Energizer 3, possibly higher! If your not careful and learn better control, you could cause a breach."
Neal gulped at her Dad's inescapable point. Being one of the few humans born and raised on the Moon, Neal knew at an almost instinctual level that causing a breach and exposing the station complex to the vacuum of the Lunar surface was the worst thing that could happen next to a flare event.
"Alright...I'll go" Neal dejectedly admitted, "But how will I survive on that mud-ball?"
"The same as humans have always survived Noel"
"Noel?"
"You can't go by Neal anymore." Noel's Father chuckled, "Noel Selene Williams, Selene so you always know where you came from."
"Your Student MID will will need a codename though, I don't have to turn it in for three more days give it some thought."
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Rowan: "At least she didn't try to intubate the desk lamp or defibrilate her iPad..."
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"Damn it, I don't care if AJG is not affiliated with Goodkind International!Β I refuse to have them getting on this station!Β Why?Β Gods, where do I start?Β Let's start with the name Goodkind also says 'hey come rob us' in some circles.Β Some villain comes up here and pops the dome....Β hell some thick between the ears Hero for that matter!Β We're just now managing to rebuild the stuff that meat head wrecked on the Dioblick station."Β Noel paused to take a breath, assessing if the men and women on the video conference call where paying attention to her or her outfit.Β
There had been an issue with the laundry, and this had been all she had to wear.Β She was grateful someone had turned up the heat in her office least the fact she didn't have on a bra show through.
"What was... EVA suits? They have..."Β her eyes went wide as a hologram appeared before her of a sleek EVA suit.Β "Ok, I changed my mind, if that's what they are offering, we'll take it."
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I figure after what Doc went through with her CO2 grenades, she might actually listen to Alya's marketing pitch.Β Sure NASA will be getting the first suits to outfit the ISS and what not, but once they're stocked, move to the private sector.
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hehe although Noel I think was slated to going to a certain mudball
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Oh bugger... this image, plus your latex cowgirl just melded in my head for a Space Cowgirl.Β I suppose I can name my version Dusty/Dust bunny, make her an 07 Poe girl... I think she can do the carbon control thing that that bounty hunter in the Lady Lightning stories does.
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Carbon Control huh?
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Eh, seems appropriate for a girl called Dusty.
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Mmm, not gonna stay a space cowgirl, just a former cowboy from ... not sure yet.Β She might get Divisor six shooters though.Β Kind of want to name her Josie "Dusty" Cartwright, with her male name being Joseph.Β <_<Β I so need to watch less Retro TV.
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Mmm, drat.Β While I like the cowgirl thing, I'm thinking maybe she'll be from a coal mining community, and was working in the mines part time/weekends.Β
Owners didn't give a flying frack, and conditions weren't the best.Β Dusty's father was going to blow the whistle and the owners got wind, so staged an "accident".Β Would have killed Dusty, her father, and the rest of the shift if her powers hadn't kicked in and allowed her to hold the roof up long enough for them all to get clear.Β Dusty stumbles out covered in coal dust, and looking very fem, and with proof it was no accident.Β Settlement money from the company is paying part of her way at Whateley.
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One last deal before she's shipped off.
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Hehee although why would a HS Frosh be wheeling and dealing
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Maybe there was an age regression aspect of her activating mutation?Β late bloomer who ended up looking 14 again.
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Well, here is what I have so far fiction-wise on her 
The Selenite
DPRagan
New Houston
Shackleton Crater, Lunar South Pole, Aitken Basin
January 20th 2007
Neal Samuel Williams tried to pay attention to the monitor; the teacher was answering questions from both classes, but the three second delay on the Earth end was jarring. It wasnβt even an interesting topic, who cares what some mud-ball leader named Napoleon did on June 18th, 1815 at Waterloo β¦ he lost to Wellington and Gebhard Leberecht von BlΓΌcher anyway.
Zoey Addison was a much more interesting subject anyway, from her spiky black hair to her slim body and pale skin; she also had rather βdereβ once you got past her exterior βtsun,β or at least if the Intel he got from her best friend Terri was any goodβ¦of course that hinged on the notion that, this time, Terri was selling him a bill of goods for her own amusementβ¦again.
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Poor gal is so in for a rude awakening when she gets dirt side.
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Still, she might get into the Golden Kids, if she doesn't alienate them.Β Huh... is she considered an alien if she grew up on the moon?
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And she formed a new team at Whateley with two others, code-named "Roll" and "Yaw."
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Pun shields holding steady at 40%
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Noel: "Bad enough that I have to go to Earth for four years...but you sent my luggage WHERE?!"
Or...
Noel: "You're going to stick that WHERE?!"
Doctor: "Ms. Williams, this is a normal routine gynecological examination, and we need baseline information since your change."
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HEhehe I like that.... I think ill try my hand
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Ally pressed her hands against the desk as she tried to make her point clear.
"I am sorry i just can't do it any more. I don't feel like i used to once it happened." the board of trial on the moon of course giveing her stern looks as Mr. Williams, in charge of safety spoke quietly.
"but you almost caused a breach when it happened, and what about the poor Whatelly kid that you stole from?" The look on his face told many stories, not a one with a happy ending.
"I-i Don't think i can Give slip back her powers. something in me feels different since he ran in to me. Its never happened before." She ried to work out something in her head so she could get out of trouble, but Nothing seemed to work out and she was getting more troubled.
It was then that slip came forward with the idea. "She is a little older then most Whatelly students... but i feel different too, They could help her out." The once boy, now stuck as a girl without the power to turn back knew something was up.
Mr. Williams growled, and gnashed his teath. "Fine. Go. But Neither one of you can ever come back to the moon while i hold my job."
Ally Was pleased. it worked out. ass slip was leading her out she hugged the presumed other girl and felt the same disorientation as before, and was more suprised to find out Slip was now again a male!
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Heh. Turned it to a verry different Whatelly story, Don't think ill keep the origin of Alice that way... but It helped me get the idea out, and maybe a little of the look too.
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Meep No not Slip I need him/her to keep his/her shape-shifting powers and her mimic ones nuuuuuu!
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WEll she got them back twards the end... My girl has the power to trade with someone close to her, though that means others get to trade her power away in the heat of things...
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I think i have a code name for her... just want to redo the origin story a little (the moon thing is definitely non cannon)
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Undoubtably, a request for the return of something to her nether regions.
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Just hope that it doesn't get misinterpreted as an "invitation"
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"No, I will not sit by while they pass that legislation! Its unconstitutional and ill-conceived. If Robo-Obama won't do something about it, I will!"
what?
was it supposed to be
a tg caption?
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I think Robo-Oboma is behind it! So be careful, you might end up slaving away on Mars!
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On behalf of my company we would like to apologize for this bug. The AI routines in charge of fixing your color blindness decided giving you a corresponding X gene that is dominate over the trait was the most viable solution. Please pat...
-Interrupting with wrath-
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"What do you mean the transfer back to my own body has been delayed?!?!!"
"We're sorry miss..er sir... The captain and the head doc haven't cosigned the authorization yet..."
"WHAT!?! But the doc said it was all minor injuries and it'd be all good in twenty four hours. I've been a girl for a week now!!! and it's the third time my appointment is delayed!!! That's INNACEPTABLE!!!"
"Sorry miss, there's nothing I can do..."
- No way in hell I'm the one telling her the technician took the wrong body to the incinerator and there's no trace amount of DNA left... - Thought the intern.
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That's Government Health Care for you.
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"Okay look can you get me back home to Earth?"
"No."
"No, what do you mean no?"
"Earh is a developing planet and its solar system is quarantined till they get into space on their own."
"But I'm from earth."
"A freak spatial-temporal vortex is outside our jurisiction. You however are and as such need to obey our laws. Now young lady if you'll just pay attention to these documents they detail things you'll need to know about your new life on Ursa-Minion."
"Young lady? I'm a 30 year old man."
"No your not, the hospital had to put you back together when you showed up as little more than shredded meat. Frankly even with our technology its amazing you survived the transition and if the hospital hadn't done such a wonderful job I doubt you would have."
"A wonderful job? I'm a teenage girl?"
"They had a 50% chance of guessing your gender considering they only use the male/female ends of the spectrum and not the ones in between. Sorry they got it wrong but done is done as they say."
". . . and what about my being half the age I should be?"
"Well you are from a developing planet and there's a lot of basic information you just don't know. We thought it best to pick a transition age. Young enough to go to school and learn the things a girl your age should know. Old enough to not be frustrated over getting treated as a little kid."
"YOU MEAN THIS WAS DELIBERATE!"
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"You see that light house on the hill? That is where Godzilla will attack. You see this little UFO on your desk? There's going to be dozens of them by morning- if they turn Godzilla female and she breeds, we're going to have a hell of a lot more problems than turning into cute gir... will you stop staring at my chest!!!"
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"Okay I understand that you were having issues with the Transporter's re-compiler but how long do I have to wait until my original pattern turns up?"
"...."
"Whaddya mean it's not in the system?"
"..."
"Someone's walking around in my body?!"
"..."
"ON MARS?! How the hell did it end up there?"
"..."
"You have to contact Mars Police and hope that my pattern doesn't get sold on the Black market?"
"..."
"THIRD TIME THIS MONTH?! THIS WAS NEVER PART OF THE TRAVEL BROCHURE!"
"..."
"Yeah, you're right. Screaming about it really won't get me anywhere. But I do have a question, who am I in now then?"
"..."
"Great, where are the others then?"
"..."
"And I can't go back home cause this pattern won't transmit."
"..."
"Yeah, Triplet sisters... Funny. Just give me the address, I'll go quietly."
"..."
"A spending account, how... thoughtful of the company."
"..."
"You're right, it's not your fault and I have not business being sarcastic and critical."
"..."
"A taxi would be nice. I only planned on a three-week vacation out here, but it sounds like I might be here a bit longer..."
"..."
"You hit on all the pattern identity theft victims that stop at your desk?"
"..."
"Ha ha, funny. I'm a replicated, stolen, and likely hacked pattern with two other identical matches in a hotel in midtown. 'Something different' indeed."
"..."
"Hey, I was a guy before this little incident, what makes you think I'd go out to drinks with you?"
"..."
"Okay, you got me. I'll see you in the Hotel lounge in four hours, okay? You're buying."
"..."
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Identity Theft takes on a whole new meaning...Makes you wonder if her current form is actually more of a Loaner.
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Worse, its a "girl in the red dress" programmed by some silly boy with some time on his hands.
She won't really understand this until she walks into the Hotel room to find the previous two identity victims asleep in a bed together.
It's not mind control, but more like the optional heterosexuality element from one of your previous sketches.
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