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Characters Name: Toxin

1. [ ] They are possessed by an angel.

2. [ ] They are possessed by a demon.

3. [ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie.

4. [ ] They are physically strong.

5. [ x ] They have a rare hair/fur/skin color. (well, it’s dyed)

6. [ x ] Their eyes are an unusual color. (Yellow glowing cyborg eyes, yup, that's a special snowflake)

7. [ ] This eye color happens to be red.

8. [x] Their eyes change color.(the mechanical eye can)

9. [ ] They have wings.

10.[ x ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift. ( he built himself some cyborg parts )

11.[] They are immortal.

12.[ ] They have large boobs.

13.[ ] They are very muscular.

14.[ x ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender. ( Idk, maybe?)

15.[ ] They are pyrokinetic/etc.

16.[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc.

17.[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers.

18.[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet.

19.[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers.

20.[ ] They are a healer.

21.[] They are from a very rich/royal family.

22.[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background.

23.[ ] They have lost one/both of their parents.

24.[ ] They ran away from home.

25.[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusisive.

26.[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death.

27.[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature.

29.[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child.

30.[] They are very attractive to the same gender.

31.[ ] They have lots of friends/no friends.

32.[ ] They are emo.

33.[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are.

35.[ x ] They have lots of morals and declare them a fair bit.

36.[ ] They have a mental disorder.

37.[ ] They have an emotional disorder.

38.[ ] They struggle to stay sane.

39.[ ] They are a psycho.

40.[ ] They have multiple personalities.

41.[x] They are very intelligent.

42.[ ] They have hallucinations.

43.[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.

44.[x] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet. (Mecha army)

45.[ ] They have a guardian spirit.

46.[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul.

47.[ ] Their soul is not the same as them.

48.[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts.

49.[x] Some part of their body glows. (Mecha parts)

50.[x] They have a rare/unusual name. (Toxin, that’s not his real name though)

51.[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, etc.

52.[ ] They have a twin/sibling(s) that they were separated from at birth/a young age.

53.[ ] They are connected with a certain element.

54.[ ] They are connected with a certain animal.

55.[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'.

56.[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga.

65.[x] They are very mysterious/dark.(he tries his best)

66.[ ] They are very lively/happy.

67.[] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly.

68.[ ] They are very patient.

69.[ ] They are from a long line of assassins.

70.[ x ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear. (glasses)

71.[ ] They have amnesia.

72.[ ] The have some sort of harmful curse upon them.

73.[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy.

74.[ ] They are 'the chosen one'.

75.[ ] They have insomnia.

Total: 11

Take points off your OC's overall score if they fit any of the following statements-

1. [ x ] They smoke. (from time to time, it does not harm him since he barely posseses any non-cybernetic organs)

2. [ ] They are an alcoholic.

3. [ ] They are overweight.

4. [ ] They are addicted to drugs.

5. [] They have a short temper.

6. [x] They enjoy bullying others. (exclusively bad heroes or people he hates to death)

7. [x] They do not care much about others. ( does not care about society and strangers)

8. [x] They are relatively emotionless. (only shows his emotional side to his gf and friends)

9. [] They have some sort of permanent medical condition.

= -4 points

*****

Total: 7 points

Your point score:

5: Anti-Sue. Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they score that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit.

6-15: Balanced Character. If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.

16-25: Borderline Mary-Sue. We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

26: Mary-Sue. Please revise your character... NOW.

Description

Saw this on 's profile and I just wanted to do it too

Characters Name: Toxin

1. [ ] They are possessed by an angel.

2. [ ] They are possessed by a demon.

3. [ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie.

4. [ ] They are physically strong.

5. [ x ] They have a rare hair/fur/skin color. (well, it’s dyed)

6. [ x ] Their eyes are an unusual color. (Yellow glowing cyborg eyes, yup, that's a special snowflake)

7. [ ] This eye color happens to be red.

8. [x] Their eyes change color.(the mechanical eye can)

9. [ ] They have wings.

10.[ x ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift. ( he built himself some cyborg parts )

11.[] They are immortal.

12.[ ] They have large boobs.

13.[ ] They are very muscular.

14.[ x ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender. ( Idk, maybe?)

15.[ ] They are pyrokinetic/etc.

16.[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc.

17.[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers.

18.[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet.

19.[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers.

20.[ ] They are a healer.

21.[] They are from a very rich/royal family.

22.[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background.

23.[ ] They have lost one/both of their parents.

24.[ ] They ran away from home.

25.[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusisive.

26.[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death.

27.[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature.

29.[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child.

30.[] They are very attractive to the same gender.

31.[ ] They have lots of friends/no friends.

32.[ ] They are emo.

33.[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are.

35.[ x ] They have lots of morals and declare them a fair bit.

36.[ ] They have a mental disorder.

37.[ ] They have an emotional disorder.

38.[ ] They struggle to stay sane.

39.[ ] They are a psycho.

40.[ ] They have multiple personalities.

41.[x] They are very intelligent.

42.[ ] They have hallucinations.

43.[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.

44.[x] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet. (Mecha army)

45.[ ] They have a guardian spirit.

46.[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul.

47.[ ] Their soul is not the same as them.

48.[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts.

49.[x] Some part of their body glows. (Mecha parts)

50.[x] They have a rare/unusual name. (Toxin, that’s not his real name though)

51.[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, etc.

52.[ ] They have a twin/sibling(s) that they were separated from at birth/a young age.

53.[ ] They are connected with a certain element.

54.[ ] They are connected with a certain animal.

55.[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'.

56.[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga.

65.[x] They are very mysterious/dark.(he tries his best)

66.[ ] They are very lively/happy.

67.[] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly.

68.[ ] They are very patient.

69.[ ] They are from a long line of assassins.

70.[ x ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear. (glasses)

71.[ ] They have amnesia.

72.[ ] The have some sort of harmful curse upon them.

73.[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy.

74.[ ] They are 'the chosen one'.

75.[ ] They have insomnia.

Total: 11

Take points off your OC's overall score if they fit any of the following statements-

1. [ x ] They smoke. (from time to time, it does not harm him since he barely posseses any non-cybernetic organs)

2. [ ] They are an alcoholic.

3. [ ] They are overweight.

4. [ ] They are addicted to drugs.

5. [] They have a short temper.

6. [x] They enjoy bullying others. (exclusively bad heroes or people he hates to death)

7. [x] They do not care much about others. ( does not care about society and strangers)

8. [x] They are relatively emotionless. (only shows his emotional side to his gf and friends)

9. [] They have some sort of permanent medical condition.

= -4 points

*****

Total: 7 points

Your point score:

5: Anti-Sue. Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they score that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit.

6-15: Balanced Character. If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.

16-25: Borderline Mary-Sue. We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

26: Mary-Sue. Please revise your character... NOW.