Comments: 61
Adjudicato [2016-03-13 08:46:13 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
This picture certainly has much going for it, most of which is easily spotted at a cursory glance. I'm afraid I can only sing praise to it, as I see little in the way to criticize.
Initially, it was the setting and expressions that caught my eye. The looks of utter elation on their faces, despite the clearly uncomfortable and slightly dangerous surroundings. It brings to my mind the feeling of being hopelessly caught up in a passionate kiss. Though one is bereft of air and exerting oneself in the process, the urge to part lips is oft late to come. It is an intense and enchanting undertone.
Pulling further on their surroundings, I'd like to complement the style and detail with which the watery scene was crafted. I find the various styles of water animation, whether still or moving image, to be both fascinating and entrancing. Here, the slight fish-eye of the perspective gives the feeling that they are alone in their contact. By that, I mean that it gives me the feeling that our observer is not human, adding further to the intimacy felt here.
Beyond that, the bubbles seem very well presented. Their shapes are myriad and inconsistent, as physics would dictate, and their style and coloration keeps them from taking up the limelight. I also find it very well done the way they cling to the clothes, as would be the case in reality.
Which brings me to my next point, the smooth rendition of the clothing. It is somewhat muted, though this perception may just be my bad eyes, yet it pops all the same. I give this point to the realistic look of Ruby's cloak as the bulk of it floats upon the surface, much like a deployed parachute.
I'll wrap this up, since I could continue ad nauseam, by speaking specifically of their expressions. Though I'm aware I mentioned it earlier, it bears one final point to my mind.
This seems a minor point, perhaps, but most of the feeling I receive from this piece comes from the very character-faithful looks on their faces. Ruby seems utterly energized and thoroughly overjoyed to be sharing this moment with Weiss. She always seemed the overly expressive member of the team, nearly unable to contain her various emotions and thoughts. Weiss, in contrast, has a very muted look of inner happiness to her. It is clear how much joy this moment brings her, by way of the escaping smile, but it still seems she's trying to contain herself.
Overall, the only note of criticism I can find is originality. This scene feels just a tad familiar to me, but this is not enough for me to expound upon. Besides that minor remark, the artist deserves every bit of praise for this excellent work.
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happy123boy [2019-03-25 17:38:55 +0000 UTC]
Hmmm...reminds me too much of a certain Puella Magi Madoka Magica moment. :,(
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loveshipp20 [2017-08-13 08:23:57 +0000 UTC]
oh my my esto es demasiado bello...una pena que solo tengamos la imaginación y fanfics y hencerforward y más imaginación...XD
que las hagan pareja lo veo difícil por más que EE.UU apoyará la boda entre el mismo sexo ;;
aparte quizás algunos digan que no es canon y de más cosas pero para mí siempre lo será en mi corazón ;3
Por cierto me encanta los detalles de la imagen, es un hermoso arte..me enamora.
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WarriorofSpectra [2017-08-11 03:13:47 +0000 UTC]
"Weiss..."
"I know..."
"Should we..."
"No..."
"But..."
"No..."
"Weiss...!"
"Don't..."
"WEISS!"
"Ruby, DON'T."
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gordhanx [2017-03-19 20:36:38 +0000 UTC]
This is probably, my favourite ship of all of RWBY. And this is absolutely beautiful. Serious, the amazing details and hopeful expressions on both, are absolutely beautiful and sweet.
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ApocalypticNugget [2016-11-23 18:17:41 +0000 UTC]
But they aren't lesbian..
Nonetheless, amazing art.
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Gravatona [2016-09-01 22:25:32 +0000 UTC]
This should be painted on the ceiling of a cathedral
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Minagi-Mikoto [2016-06-04 14:10:04 +0000 UTC]
My OTP in RWBY! Great job! ^^
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TeleportGarnet [2016-05-31 05:09:37 +0000 UTC]
BEAUTIFUL!!! I Love the art, strange...I'm not a lesbian myself or Bi, but I still find these pictures cute!
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AtsirkEnoh [2016-02-22 02:03:40 +0000 UTC]
Reminds me of Strawberry Panic.
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mpz28 [2015-12-25 09:30:45 +0000 UTC]
very nice
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YURIsnipa777 [2015-10-05 14:18:11 +0000 UTC]
Outstandingly well done ! I'am at a loss for words .....
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ThoughtsandWonders [2015-09-14 07:08:42 +0000 UTC]
Words cannot describe the level of detail and texture in front of me right now. A definitive and deserving favorite for White Rose shipping
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zSWAMPWALERz [2015-09-13 22:09:50 +0000 UTC]
Truly amazing.
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Lilly7854 [2015-08-28 16:12:24 +0000 UTC]
Freaking cute.
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Cryingpelt [2015-08-16 20:55:17 +0000 UTC]
I really like this style! It's so beautiful!
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RWBY42 [2015-08-15 05:03:40 +0000 UTC]
This is so cute!
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GallantWolfAura [2015-08-11 21:31:25 +0000 UTC]
I love this so much~
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GrisSmoke [2015-08-09 22:04:26 +0000 UTC]
Never anything less than beautiful.
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Nahte123456 [2015-08-09 17:05:54 +0000 UTC]
Welp....That's f***ing beautiful.
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Tirithek [2015-08-09 11:02:23 +0000 UTC]
Ooh wow, I just saw this on Tumblr and thought it was absolutely gorgeous! I love how you've done the ripples of Ruby's cloak and the waves of Weiss' hair. Just beautiful.
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Master-Kosa [2015-08-08 18:35:12 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful piece of art!
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Tuc396 [2015-08-08 14:27:42 +0000 UTC]
...
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I don't know what to say. The best I can come up with is perfection.
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Joey245 [2015-08-08 04:23:59 +0000 UTC]
Those are some wonderful bubbles! And Ruby and Weiss look so pretty!
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Tadokoro [2015-08-08 03:06:38 +0000 UTC]
This caught my eye immediately, it's amazing. Instantly faved. ^_^
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NightRoses13 [2015-08-08 01:57:54 +0000 UTC]
I really like this piece, but if you are looking for improvement, perhaps you could consider working on some smaller details like the emblems, how the cape touches the surface and how Weiss' hair flows in the water. This piece is fantastic though ^^ I really don't think you need to worry about this piece critique-wise
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Jonot [2015-08-08 01:31:38 +0000 UTC]
I don't know about everyone else, but I am so eager for season 3.
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Cy-Man [2015-08-08 00:23:09 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful~
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PaladinLang [2015-08-07 19:51:18 +0000 UTC]
what is there to critique?
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termhn [2015-08-07 19:08:35 +0000 UTC]
Omg you keep getting better and better. Seriously, it's ridiculous how you're improving. At least IMO. Amazing.
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jcpeters726 [2015-08-07 17:37:52 +0000 UTC]
Awesome^.^
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Gear001Mrk2 [2015-08-07 16:03:40 +0000 UTC]
This is...
Gorgeous.
Seriously, between this and that Yang Kimono piece, you've jumped to one of my favorite artists.
Of all time.
*Leans out window, screaming to the sky*
Yeah, that's right Da Vinci, step up your game, n00b!
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knives4cash [2015-08-07 16:03:05 +0000 UTC]
WOW. This is astounding! Congratulations on yet another master piece!
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