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Diangos — The Shower

Published: 2011-12-27 21:36:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 1185; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
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Description Ever since I bought my new flash I've been aching to try it out in an artistic shoot. So what better place to try it out than my own bathroom?

I told Iulia about a few of my photographic ideas and she was all over them, saying she wants to participate in at least a part of them - this was one of those ideas.

Model + Make-up:
Photographer + Post:

As always, please respect the model. If you have something unflattering to say, say what you want about the photo but please leave the model out of it.
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Comments: 10

GrauWeiss [2012-01-26 08:32:39 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


Interesting in this picture is the position of the model. Since it isn't a classical stance, or a stance you're accustomed with, you, as a viewer, have many things to discover. And your eyes keep wondering from her skin, down to the line of her dress, the tiles, just to reach back at her skin again. This is very good as it lets the viewer stay in the picture.

The color range is good. It's enough to give contrast to your picture, but doesn't burden it with unnecessary details. I especially like the soft contrast between her skin and her dress. The lower right part of the picture seems heavier (due to the pronounced black color) but I won't add this as a flaw.

There are just a few things which bother me in this picture: First, there are the water drops in the right. They look like noise and are by far not enough to suggest a real shower.
Second, there are these bumps or cracks on the wall which distract the viewers attention from the model.

Light and shading are good and suite the picture. And I also like the "story" this picture seems to be telling.

I look forward to your next shots! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>

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dukkhey [2012-06-29 09:46:15 +0000 UTC]

asta-i! mult mai nice. editarea si lumina. modelul daca statea umpic inclinata in dreapta sa formeze unghiuri cu peretele era fsi mai fain!

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TanuSingh [2011-12-30 20:47:19 +0000 UTC]

Love the framing

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Diangos In reply to TanuSingh [2012-01-31 08:58:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I try and do my best

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rocishop [2011-12-28 17:19:48 +0000 UTC]

charming !!!

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Diangos In reply to rocishop [2011-12-29 07:24:49 +0000 UTC]

What exactly?

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rocishop In reply to Diangos [2011-12-29 08:01:45 +0000 UTC]

I don't know , Awesome shot or Lovely!
so Charming!!!

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SeptemberDawn [2011-12-28 05:31:05 +0000 UTC]

very nice.
almost perfect framing

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Diangos In reply to SeptemberDawn [2011-12-29 07:24:59 +0000 UTC]

Multzam

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SeptemberDawn In reply to Diangos [2011-12-29 07:28:27 +0000 UTC]

bitte

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