Comments: 10
GrauWeiss [2012-01-26 08:32:39 +0000 UTC]
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Interesting in this picture is the position of the model. Since it isn't a classical stance, or a stance you're accustomed with, you, as a viewer, have many things to discover. And your eyes keep wondering from her skin, down to the line of her dress, the tiles, just to reach back at her skin again. This is very good as it lets the viewer stay in the picture.
The color range is good. It's enough to give contrast to your picture, but doesn't burden it with unnecessary details. I especially like the soft contrast between her skin and her dress. The lower right part of the picture seems heavier (due to the pronounced black color) but I won't add this as a flaw.
There are just a few things which bother me in this picture: First, there are the water drops in the right. They look like noise and are by far not enough to suggest a real shower.
Second, there are these bumps or cracks on the wall which distract the viewers attention from the model.
Light and shading are good and suite the picture. And I also like the "story" this picture seems to be telling.
I look forward to your next shots! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>
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TanuSingh [2011-12-30 20:47:19 +0000 UTC]
Love the framing
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rocishop [2011-12-28 17:19:48 +0000 UTC]
charming !!!
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rocishop In reply to Diangos [2011-12-29 08:01:45 +0000 UTC]
I don't know , Awesome shot or Lovely!
so Charming!!!
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